Wahaj khan Feature English 104 -2k17

Very poorly written. This is not a feature. It is in article style.  
Dear students: Feature is always reporting based, with human angle. Primary purpose to entertain written in entertaining manner or given info interesting manner. Differentiate between article and feature 
Proper noun should be with cap. 
Mind spelling 
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Write ur name, genre of writing and roll No etc in the text file also. after composing revise and check spelling etc

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104 -2k17
Wahaj khan Feature English Referred back
[[[Hyderabad is the 7th biggest city of Pakistan  and 2nd is in Sindh. though it has many Streets /Roads like,Autobahn Road,Qasim Chowk,Airport Road, Station Road and one of the most famous Road called  as Thandi Sadak  .]]] No need of these two sentences,

 Thandi sadak has started from Gul  Centre and at ends at Giddu Chowk Covering the area of approximately 3-4 km .
 According to its name, there is a reason behind of it's name Thandi Sadak that is , before Partition this road is covered by dense trees due to  this road is cold in hot summer while walking or driving through this road will enjoy the fresh breeze filtering through the trees and the chipring of the birds have a soothing effect on you in this peaceful zone of Hyderabad have the name Thandi sadak.
                                          It also grasp the attention of People of  Hyderabad and famous for having popular Food Brands like Pizza hut and KFC and one of the first Hyderabad Threen Star Indus Hotel on it . it also have more Food Points .
                                This Road Also have few of the most -important and famous buildings of Hyderabad i.e Shahbaz Building, State life BuIlding and registerar office .It has the first Nationa Cricket Stadium of Hyderabad Niaz Stadium and the frist and only Fsmily amusement Park Rani BAgh .
              This road is Divided into  three branches one of which link to wadwah Road to easily excess the Higway the other link to G.O.R colony , latiafabad and third one is links to Giddu Chowk . it has a flyower who took to the Giddu Chowk who were Established in 2011.The on side of this road is Defence are and the other side of this road panwar Goth .  There are accidents on every other day due to lack of Speed breaker because this road is very smooth and fast everyone in in hurry.
In short this is the beautiful and peaceful road  having loads of amazing and famous buildings of Hyderabad.

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