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CRICKET IN HYDERABAD 

 Malik Muhammad Hadi

Roll no: 2k17-18/Mc/55

Class BS |||

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Cricket is a game which is developed in 19^th and 20^th century in England. International matches have been played since 1844 and now it has become world’s 2nd biggest game after football. It is Pakistan’s most played and watched game and people of Pakistan are very passionate for this game and you can find fans of cricket of every age group in every city and village of Pakistan.

People of Hyderabad are also very passionate about this game and majority of people are crazy about this game. People of every age group are fans of this game in hyderabad whether they are children, students, Businessman, Officers, Labour or belongs to any category.
Gully cricket is the initial stage where every player starts playing cricket and Gully cricket is mostly played in hyderabad on weekly holidays i.e Friday or Sunday. Gully cricket mostly played in Ramzan nights in hyderabad and People of different areas arrange tournaments in their areas and townfolks play cricket till Sehri. Different areas challenge the other areas and fix the match and enjoy this game.
There is too much talent of playing cricket in people of hyderabad but they are unable to go to higher level of this game because of lack of academies in this city. Only few players from hyderabad have represented Pakistan's national cricket team at international level. Sharjeel khan and Muhammad hussnain are the players who are currently representing Pakistan cricket team at international level. But more players deserve to represent Pakistan team but they are unable because of least opportunities in the city. There is only one stadium i.e Niaz Stadium in the city which is also not in good condition and is ignored by Pcb from many years. So it is very hard to play cricket at higher level in the city which is the biggest loss of the talented players of the city and the Pakistan.
Niaz stadium in hyderabad has a historical values, the first ever hat-trick in One Day International took by Pakistan's Jalal-ud-Din at this stadium. The legend of Pakistan Javed miandad scored 280 not out runs at this ground which is his career best score, and now this ground has ignored completely by Pcb. Niaz stadium hosted its last one day on 24 Jan 2008 and after that it has been unable to host any international match.
When big events of crickets came like Worldcups, Pakistan Super league (Psl), the fever of cricket in people hyderabad is very high. Everyone is talking about these tournaments and matches and arrange big screens on roads and in their areas for big matches like India vs Pakistan to enjoy the cricket.

Some schools like county cambridge school, beacon house etc also arrange matches and cricket tournaments for the students of their school and students of these school from primary level to secondary level take part in these tournaments. School and colleges arrange tournaments for many games of sport but most of the students take part in cricket because fan following of cricket is much more than any other sport in Hyderabad.

So we can say that people of hyderabad love playing and watching cricket but this city is unable to get the chances they deserve. Pcb should pay attention to this city and the players from this city by working on the stadiums and by building some academies here in the city. So that young boys and girls get chances to show their talent in the game and take the name of their city to higher levels just like other players from biggest city making their own name and making their city proud. 

Shahbaz Junejo-Sindhi- Article Referred back 136

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Why and how this crisis has erupted? as Pakistan was in surplus in wheat during last 3-5 years
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Iپاڪستان ۾ اٽي جو بحران

شهباز جوڻيجو

2k18/MC/136

:پاڪستان ۾ پهريان کان ئي مهانگائي جا انبار لڳل آهن ته اتي وري  اٽي جو بحران به ڪنهن عذاب کان گھٽ نه  آهي.

گذريل مهيني کان پاڪستان ۾ اٽي جو بحران وڌي رهيو آهي جيڪو انتهائي غڻتئ جوڳو عمل آهي ذريعن جو چوڻ آهي ته اٽي جي بحران جي اڳٿي پهريان کان ئي وئي هئي جنهن جو علم حڪومت کي پڻ هئو پر ان جي باوجود حڪومت طرفان ڪو به ردعل ظاهر نه ڪيو ويو جنهن سبب جي ڪري عوام هن وقت اٽي جي بحران کي منهن ڏئي رهيو آهي.

جٿي اٽي جي ٻوري 2700 وڪرو ٿيندي  هئي ته ان جڳه تي هن وقت 5000 في ٻوري وڪرو ٿي رهي آهي جنهن کي خريد ڪرڻ غريب جي وس کان ٻاهر ٿي ويو آهي ان جي پويان واپارين جي سڄي ملي ڀڳت آهي جيڪي اٽي کي اسٽاڪ ڪري ۽ وڏي قيمت  ۾ وڪرو ڪيو وڃي ٿو.

حڪومت جي طئي ڪيل سرڪاري اگه مطابق اٽو 45 رپيه في ڪلو وڪرو ڪرڻ جو حڪم آهي  ته اتي اٽو 70 رپيه في ڪلو وڪرو ٿي رهيو آهي.

جڏهن ته حڪوت عوام جي سهولت لاء  يوٽيلٽي اسٽور کولي چڪي آهي پر غريب عوام لاء يوٽيلٽي اسٽور به نه هئڻ برابر آهن جن مان اٽو توڙي ٻيو سامان به انهن کي ڏنو ويندو آهي جيڪي اعلئ سرمائيڪار آهن ۽ جن وٽ سفارشون آهن.

حڪومت اٽي جي بحران تي قابو پائڻ لاء  30000 ٽن اٽو ٻاهران گهرايو ويو آهي ته جيئن اٽي جي بحران تي قابو پائي سگهجي.

هن وقت ڏٺو وڃي ته پاڪستان ۾ ڪڻڪ ٻاهران ته گهرائي وئي آهي پر ڪجه مهينن کانپوء پاڪستان جي پنهنجي ڪڻڪ جا فصل تيار آهن جن جي اپت لهڻ کان پوء انهن هارين ۽ مزدورن سان  ظلم ڪري رهي آهي جيڪي انهن فصلن تي زندگي بسر ڪري رهيا آهن حڪومت جي ان عمل جي ڪري ڪڻڪ جا  اگه ڪيرايا ويندا  ۽ سستي اگهه ۾  ڪڻڪ وٺي ان کي اسٽاڪ ڪيو ويندو جنهن جو سڌو سنئون فائدو واپارين کي آهي.

جيڪڏهن حڪومت 30000 ٽن ڪڻڪ جي جڳه تي ان انگ جو اڌ گهرائي هان ته اٽي جي بحران سان  گڏوگڏ پاڪستان کي پنهنجي ڪڻڪ به ملڻ شروع ٿي وڃي ها ۽ ڪڻڪ جي سار سنڀال ڪندڙ هارين کي پڻ فائدو ٿئي ها.

Talha Asghar Article English BS 153 Revised

Revised

Life Without Technology In Hyderabad

                                       Article by Talha Asghar

                                     2K18/MC/153

Technology nowadays is totally a time saver. It has made our existence tremendously stress-free and contented. It also summarizes our time and liveliness in any field of labor. As we all know, these days life without technology would be so alarming. Even we can’t visualize our life without technology, as it would be terrifying. Hyderabad city which is continually known as a small town is also a huge part of technology, developing the unabridged city is an enormous work but introducing technology can aware people about how backward they were before and what they can change as a country to be well known in the world.

Technology played a huge part in discovering Hyderabad as a city from a small town. Technology has so many advantages which made our life easier and a city well-developed. For example machine, telephone, Wi-Fi, mobile, laptop, transport, etc. All those technologies made our life easier but it also made us lazier because it bound us with itself. Today, we can’t even imagine our life without all those technologies. For example Today, we literally want mobile and Wi-Fi everywhere because, without Wi-Fi, we feel incomplete and boring. But life without technology has also so many advantages.

Hyderabad have become really advanced in technology, although there are still many institutes using the computers which aren't updated. Talking about latest mobile phones and other gadgets they are very up to date. People buy and sell it in a huge number in markets. About 98% of the city is in hold with the internet. HCC is one of the most active cable network in Hyderabad, 65% of the city is using HCC's cable as well as their cable net. Other Wi-Fi users are using PTCL and storm fiber very frequently now a days in Hyderabad.

As we all know, Nowadays mobile, laptop or Wi-Fi are the most important part of our daily life and it entertains us and it also helps us in different ways. But all those technologies just made us lazy and we all just waste our time using a laptop or mobile. Life without mobile, laptop or Wi-Fi appears so tedious but it has a lead to realization close to our family because when we use such types of gadgets we start ignoring our surroundings including our family. In fact, we ignore everyone. Even we can not pay attention to anything but without, we will able to gather with our family and beloved ones.

Technology like the mobile application is one of the most helpful aspects of our daily life and without any doubt it helps us a lot in many ways like we just pay our bills with those mobile applications. Different food ordering applications are also helping us to order food without going out. But all those applications made us extremely idle and physically hostile because using those applications, we can not even verve out for anything and it is compulsive as to be in a house arrest without regretting it. But life without mobile applications helps us to go out, feel fresh and being physically fit by doing a walk and it also made us do the thing on our own.

Life without technology is inconceivable. The era and the city we are living in well known with the help of technology. The reputation of our city is increased by the help of technology that’s why it's important for every being struggling with hardships and its important for those cities, towns and villages who want to be recognized and aware can be developed only with the help of technology.

How many net users are their?
How many cable networks and their customers? 
What is situation at Hyderabad's computers, mobile and others new technology items? 
Qualify and quantify ur statement with facts and figures. visit these markets, their associations
Their must be mechanics related to this field.
Just putting Name of Hyderabad will not do. 
Referred back, file revised till Sunday Feb 2

Life Without Technology In Hyderabad

                                       Article by Talha Asghar

                                     2K18/MC/153

Technology nowadays is totally a time saver. It has made our existence tremendously stress-free and contented. It also summarizes our time and liveliness in any field of labor. As we all know, these days life without technology would be so alarming. Even we can’t visualize our life without technology, as it would be terrifying. Hyderabad city which is continually known as a small town is also a huge part of technology, developing the unabridged city is an enormous work but introducing technology can aware people about how backward they were before and what they can change as a country to be well known in the world.

Technology played a huge part in discovering Hyderabad as a city from a small town. Technology has so many advantages which made our life easier and a city well-developed. For example machine, telephone, Wi-Fi, mobile, laptop, transport, etc. All those technologies made our life easier but it also made us lazier because it bound us with itself. Today, we can’t even imagine our life without all those technologies. For example Today, we literally want mobile and Wi-Fi everywhere because, without Wi-Fi, we feel incomplete and boring. But life without technology has also so many advantages.

As we all know, Nowadays mobile, laptop or Wi-Fi are the most important part of our daily life and it entertains us and it also helps us in different ways. But all those technologies just made us lazy and we all just waste our time using a laptop or mobile. Life without mobile, laptop or Wi-Fi appears so tedious but it has a lead to realization close to our family because when we use such types of gadgets we start ignoring our surroundings including our family. In fact, we ignore everyone. Even we can not pay attention to anything but without, we will able to gather with our family and beloved ones.

Technology like the mobile application is one of the most helpful aspects of our daily life and without any doubt it helps us a lot in many ways like we just pay our bills with those mobile applications. Different food ordering applications are also helping us to order food without going out. But all those applications made us extremely idle and physically hostile because using those applications, we can not even verve out for anything and it is compulsive as to be in a house arrest without regretting it. But life without mobile applications helps us to go out, feel fresh and being physically fit by doing a walk and it also made us do the thing on our own.

Transport or vehicles are vital technology which helps us to travel and also helps us to transfer goods. As we all know that, forgoing somewhere we must travel and vehicles like a car or motorbike help us a lot. Transport has many advantages but it also had a huge disadvantage of air pollution. Heavy vehicle transport like trucks or buses destroys our environment by its smolder. Life without transport technology can be challenging in our day-to-day routine but without heavy cars and unhealthy smoke, it will benefit us to live in a clean and healthy environment.

Life without technology is inconceivable. The era and the city we are living in well known with the help of technology. The reputation of our city is increased by the help of technology that’s why it's important for every being struggling with hardships and its important for those cities, towns and villages who want to be recognized and aware can be developed only with the help of technology.

Mohsin Raza- BS 86 - Article Urdu Referred back

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''نااہل ملازم''

آج کل جھاں پاکستان کا ہر دوسرا شخص سرکاری ملازمت کے لئے پریشانی سے دوچار ہے علم اور اہلیت ناقدری کا شکار ہے

ہر صوبے سے بیروزگاری کے نارے بُلند ہو رہے ہیں تعلیم یافتہ اور باشعور نوجوان لاچاری کے مارے مزدوری کرنے پہ مجبور ہو چکے ہیں ایک طرف جھاں اہلیت و قابلیت نظراندازی کا شکار ہے تو دوسری طرف وہیں سرکاری شعبوں میں بہت سے نااہل لوگ ملازمتوں سے نوازے ہوئے ہیں 

لا شعور اور نااہل لوگ صرف اور صرف سفارشی طاقتوں اور پیسؤں کے دم پر ملازمتیں لے کر بیٹھے ہوئے ہیں 

حالات کچھ ایسے ہیں کے یہاں بھترین CGPA کے ساتھ گریجویشن مکمل کرنے والے غریب لڑکے مجھے ہوٹلوں پر ویٹر کی نوکری کرتے نظر آتے ہیں جن شاگردوں کی قابلیت اکثر ان کے اپنے استادوں کو بھی حیران کر دیتی تھی جن پر اپنے استاد ناز کیا کرتے تھے جو لڑکے سٹیج پر آکر ڈائیس پر دونوں ہاتھ رکھ کر اپنا سر اٹھا کر فر فر انگلش بولا کرتے تھے آج حالات نے ان کے ہاتھوں میں چائے اور کھانے کی ٹرے تہما دی ہے اور ان کی زبان پر بس اب ایک ہی جملا رہ گیا ہے ''جی صاحب کیا لینگے چائے یا کھانا''؟ یونیورسٹی میں دوستوں کے بیچ جب کنٹین پر چل کر کچھ کھانے کی بات ہوتی تھی تو جو لڑکے اس بات کو ٹال دیا کرتے تھے اور کبھی بھی کنٹین پر نہیں جاتے تھے فقط بل دینے کے خیال سے وہ گھبراتے تھے اپنی پڑھائی کے واسطے پیسؤں کو بچاتے تھے بیشک اپنے حساب سے یہ کام تو بڑا اچھا وہ کرتے تھے مگر افسوس اس بات کا ہوتا ہے وہ ابھی تک کچھ ڈھنگ کا نہیں کھا پاتے ہیں جس پڑھائی کے لئے وہ پیسؤں کو بچایا کرتے تھے وہ پڑھائی تو کب کی مکمل ہو چکی مگر اب بھی وہ صرف دو چیزوں کے علاوہ کبھی کچھ کھاتے ہوئے نظر نہیں آتے ہیں یا تو ہوٹل کے کسی کونے میں بیٹھے ہوئے کبھی لوگوں کا بچایا ہوا جھوٹا کھاتے نظر آتے ہیں یا تو کبھی کسی سر پہرے بگڑے رئیس کی ڈانٹ کھاتے ہوئے نظر آتے ہیں اور وہیں اس ہی معشرے میں نظر گہمائی جائے تو کافی سرکاری اداروں میں مجھے ایسے لوگ نظر آتے ہیں جن کو انگلش میں اپنا نام بھی دو دفعا سوچ کر پھر لکھنا پڑتا ہے ایسے نااہل لوگ بھی یھاں اچھی ملازمتوں پر فائز ملتے ہیں ہر روز یہاں نیوز چینلز میں ایسی کئی خبریں میں نے نشر ہوتے دیکھی ہیں کبھی جن میں کسی نااہل سرکاری ڈاکٹر کی غفلت کا ذکر ہوتا ہے تو کبھی کسی پولیس والے کا خود کسی جرم میں مُلوًث ہونے کا ذکر ہوتا ہے کبھی کسی استاد کی اپنی شاگر کو حراساں کرنے کی خبر ہوتی ہے تو کبھی کسی سرکاری ملازم کی کرپشن میں مُلوًث ہونے کی خبر نظر آتی ہے اور بھی ایسی ہازار خبریں روزانہ ہمارے نیوز چینلز پر اور ہمارے اخباروں میں گشت کرتی نظر آتی ہیں جن سے ہمارے اس معشرے میں نااہل سرکاری ملازموں کی موجودگی کا خوب احساس ہوتا ہے

لوگوں کو جب گفتگو کرتے دیکھتا ہوں تو ان کی گفتگو کا عنوان اکثر یہ ہوتا ہے کے بھائی سرکار کچھ نہیں دیتی سرکار سے کچھ نہیں ملتا کاش سرکاری اسکولوں میں پڑھائی ہوتی کاش سرکاری اسکولوں میں صفائی ہوتی تو ہم بھی نجی اسکولوں کے جہنجھٹ سے بچ جاتے ہر ماہ اتنی فیس بھرنے سے بچ جاتے اب اسی بات پر اگر تھوڑا غور کیا جائے تو سمجھنے کی بات یہ ہے کہ لوگ تو بس سارا ملبہٰ گورمینٹ پر ڈال کر بات کر دیتے ہیں لیکن اگر بات کی گھرائی میں جا کر دیکھا جائے تو ہر بات میں صرف گورمینٹ ہی قصور وار  نہیں ہے بلکہ کافی معملات میں سارا کا سارا قصور صرف نااہل ملازموں کا ہوتا ہے گورمینٹ ہمیں تعلیمی ادارے بنا کر دیتی ہے گورنمینٹ ہمیں تعلیمی اداروں کی مرمت کروانے کے لئے لاکھوں روپیؤں کی بجٹ دیتی ہے گورمینٹ تعلیمی اداروں میں کام کرنے والے تمام ملازموں کو اچھی تنخواہ دیتی ہے لیکن اس کے باوجود جب استاد اسکول میں کلاس لینے کے لئے جاتا ہی نہیں ہے تو اس ایک استاد کی وجہ سے انگلی گورمینٹ پر اٹھتی ہے جب اس اسکول کا چپراسی اس اسکول کی روزانہ صفائی نہیں کرتا کام چوری کا مظاہرا کرتا ہے تو اس ایک چپراسی کی نااہلی کی وجہ سے تمام گورمینٹ تعلیمی ادارے بدنامی کا شکار ہوتے ہیں گورمینٹ سالانہ فنڈ دیتی ہے لیکن وہ سارے پیسئے ادروں پہ خرچ ہونے کے بجائے اوپر ئی اوپر سے ہڑپ ہو جاتے ہیں لاکھوں روپے اپنی جیب میں ڈالنے کے بعد پھر وہ ہی ملازمین شکایتیں کرتے ہیں کے ادرے کی بیلڈنگ ضعیف ہو چکی ہے فرنیچر خراب ہو چکا ہے ہمارا مطالبہ ہے کہ ہمیں نئی بیلڈنگ دئی جائے خدارا اگر آپ حکومتی اعنات کے سارے پیسئے سرکاری عمارتوں کی بحالی اور ترقیاتی کاموں پر ایمانداری سے خرچ کریں تو یہ سرکاری عمارتیں کبھی اتنی جلدی ضعیف نہیں ہونگی گورمینٹ سے جو نعمتیں ملتی ہیں ملازموں کو چاہیئے کے ان نعمتوں کی قدر کریں آج کل عورت سرکاری ہسپتال میں اپنا بچہ پیدا کرنے کے لئے جانے سے کیوں گھبراتی ہے؟ فقط اس وجہ سے کہ یہاں ہر روز کسی ڈاکٹر یا کسی نرس کی غفلت کی کھانی کانوں کو سنائی دیتی ہے فلاں ہسپتال میں ایک ڈاکر کی غفلت کی وجہ سے ڈیلوری آپریشن کے دوران کنچی عورت کے پیٹ میں رہ جانے کی وجہ سے عورت فوت ہوگئی

ہمارے معاشرے میں تقریبن ہر محکمے میں نااہل ملازمین کی ایسی ہزاروں مثالیں ملتی ہیں مگر میں نے بلکل ہی عام سی مثالیں بیان کی ہیں جو ہر شخص نے اپنے درمیان زندگی میں کبھی نہ کبھی یقینن محسوس کی ہونگی اور اس سے زیادہ حیران کُن بات بھلا کیا ہو سکتی ہے کے ہمارے ملک کی تاریخ میں تو وزیراعظم پر بھی نااہلی کا الزام لگ چکا ہے بات کا خلصہ یہ ہے کے یہاں اعلیٰ افسران سے لے کر نیچلے حصے کے تمام اعملداروں تک نااہل ملازموں کی ہزاروں زندہ مثالیں سانس لے رہی ہیں مگر ہمارا پورا نظام خاموش تماشائی بنا ہوا ہے میرے اپنے آس پاس ایسے کافی سرکاری ملازموں کی مثالیں موجود ہیں جو کبھی قسمتی اپنے ادارے میں بس چکر لگانے جاتے ہیں لکین وہ بھی ہر ماہ سرکاری خزانے سے تنخواہ پوری اٹھا رہے ہیں مگر افسوس ایسے ملازمین سے سرکاری اداروں کو کوئی بھی فاعدہ نہیں ہے بلکہ اندر ہی اندر ایسے لوگوں کی وجہ سے ہمارے سرکاری محکمے بس تباہی اور بدنامی کا شکار ہو رہے ہیں بس مختصرن اتنی گزارش ہے کے اب اس نظام کو ایک واضع تبدیلی کی بڑی شدید ضرورت ہے حکومت سے گزارش ہے کے ایک آپریشن کر کے تمام سرکاری محکموں سے  ہر اس شخص کو فارغ کر دیا جائے جو کام چور ہے ہر اس شخص کو ملازمت سے نکال دیا جائے جو بھی نااہل ملازم ہے اور ان ساری ملازمتوں کے لئے ایک میرٹ ٹیسٹ لیا جائے اور ملک کے قابل اور اہل نوجوانوں کو ملازمت کا موقع دیا جائے کتنے دُکھ کی بات ہے کے ہمارے یہاں پڑھے لکھے قابل نوجوان مذدوری کر رہے ہیں اور نااہل لوگ ملازمت کر رہے ہیں درحقیقت مذدوری تو نااہلوں کو کرنی چاہیئے کیوں کے ملازمتوں پر صرف اہلیت رکھنے والے نوجوان کا حق ہے یقینن ایسی واضع تبدیلی کا ہمارا ملک کب سے منتظر ہے دعا ہے خدا ہمارے ملک کو ایک دن ایسی تبدیلی نصیب فرمائے.

Sarang Laghari - BS 134 Article English Revised

                   Club cricket of Mirpurkhas

                                                                                    Sarang Laghari

                           2k18-mc-134

What are the clubs doing for the young players of Mirpurkhas? Every sport is important for fitness and getting rid of anxiety. Now a days people prefer to play cricket and it’s very famous sport of cities and villages of Pakistan. Cricket is passion of some people, they play for clubs to improve their technic and build up stamina to play for long. It depends on the coaches and management of the clubs that how they groom the players to play next level cricket.

Famous clubs of Mirpurkhas are Akbar Shaheed club, Zain Meo club, Evergreen club, Khan boys club, etc, these are the clubs who produced players like Taj Wasan, Sadam Arain, Behram Khan, Suleman , Akeel Anjum, Zeeshan Meo, Shahid Pahnwar, Awais Ahmad ,Umair Ahmad, Lala Feroz and many others, who played next level cricket like, National under 19 team, Faisal bank cup, Quaid-e-Azam trophy and other first class (FC) events.

Shaheed Benazeer cricket stadium, PCB cricket ground, comprehensive ground, satlite town scheme 2 ground,and some other grounds in the surrounding of Mirpurkhas are famous and these grounds host different type of tournaments and teams of other cities of Sindh like Karachi, Hyderabad, Sukkur, Badin, Tando Muhammad Khan, Tando Allahyar, Umerkot come to play with different Mirpurkhas cricket clubs. Players of Mirpurkhas club’s are not satisfied with the facilities given in the grounds. They want more facilities to perform well for their teams, for the fans who love them and for themselves also.

If we plant a tree but do not water it then the tree will not grow up and become fade, like that if we do not look after cricket and cricket players they will not grow up. According to plsyers Pakistan cricket board is not cooperating with them but  some famous citizens like, Haji Jabbar Halepoto, Kareem Wassan,Junaid Buland, Waheed Abbasi and his brothers and many others are serving players and Mirpurkhas cricket to keep it alive.They are happy and  are also thankfull for the services of these famous personalties. Players and common people love these personalties because they support cricket and cricketers.

After having interviews of some players I got to know that what are the clubs doing for the future of young players of Mirpurkhas. Players in their interviews said that club cricket is very interesting format of cricket and they learn a lot of things from it. In an interview a young player Behram Khan said that club cricket is the starting point of professional cricket, through it players like him get the chance of playing next level cricket. A best all-rounder Taj Wasan said that club cricket entertain the people and it’s a way of learning for players like him.

Some players had complaints in their interviews on the selection method of Pakistan cricket board. Majority  of players were strictly against the Pakistan cricket board’s decision of eliminating regional cricket from domestic cricket structure, because by that step young players will have less chances to show off their talent and performance infront of selectors. Some players in their interview  requested Pakistan cricket board to give some funds to the clubs for those players whose technic and game is good but they can not afford to play cricket because of crises.

Ofcourse it’s Pakistan cricket board’s duty to issue funds, because if  you can not give proper chances to the players then atleast keep the club cricket alive because people also love this format of cricket. It’s also every common people’s duty to encourage club cricketers and support them. Club cricketer’s priority is to get love from their fans. Most of the players play club cricket because of local fans love, play for those who identify the players by their names. Club cricket of Mirpurkhas has got talent and these players are trying hard to serve the Nation

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Find more details abt cricket in Mirpurkhas, some names, their patrons, playgrounds etc

 Club cricket of Mirpurkhas

                                               Sarang Laghari                      2k18-mc-134

Every sport is important for fitness and getting rid of anxiety. Now a days people prefer to play cricket and it’s very famous sport of cities and villages of Pakistan. Cricket is passion of some people, they play for clubs to improve their technic and build up stamina to play for long. It depends on the coaches and management of the clubs that how they groom the players to play next level cricket.

Famous clubs of Mirpurkhas are Akbar Shaheed club, Zain Meo club, Evergreen club, Khan boys club, etc, these are the clubs who produced players like Taj Wasan, Sadam Arain, Behram Khan, Suleman , Akeel Anjum, Zeeshan Meo, Shahid Pahnwar, Awais Ahmad ,Umair Ahmad, Lala Feroz and many others, who played next level cricket like, National under 19 team, Faisal bank cup, Quaid-e-Azam trophy and other first class (FC) events.

After having interviews of some players I got to know that what are the clubs doing for the future of young players of Mirpurkhas. Players in their interviews said that club cricket is very interesting format of cricket and they learn a lot of things from it. In an interview a young player Behram Khan said that club cricket is the starting point of professional cricket, through it players like him get the chance of playing next level cricket. A best all-rounder Taj Wasan said that club cricket entertain the people and it’s a way of learning for players like him.

Some players had complaints in their interviews on the selection method of Pakistan cricket board. Majority  of players were strictly against the Pakistan cricket board’s decision of eliminating regional cricket from domestic cricket structure, because by that step young players will have less chances to show off their talent and performance infront of selectors. Some players in their interview  requested Pakistan cricket board to give some funds to the clubs for those players whose technic and game is good but they can not afford to play cricket because of crises.

Ofcourse it’s Pakistan cricket board’s duty to issue funds, because if  you can not give proper chances to the players then atleast keep the club cricket alive because people also love this format of cricket. It’s also every common people’s duty to encourage club cricketers and support them. Club cricketer’s priority is to get love from their fans. Most of the players play club cricket because of local fans love, play for those who identify the players by their names. Club cricket of Mirpurkhas has got talent and these players are trying hard to serve the Nation

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                 Pakistani Clothing

The term Pakistani clothing refers to the ethnic clothing that is typically worn by individuals in the country of Pakistan.

Pakistani clothing press the culture of pakistan, the demographics of pakistan and regional cultures which include Punjabi culture, Sindhi culture, Balochi culture, KPK culture, and Kashmiri culture.

Each dress and culture in any region reflects weather conditions, way of living and distinctive style which gives it a unique identity among all cultures.

In Punjab male wear Pagri, Dhoti Khussa with shalwar kameez

Women prefer light embroidery on simple shalwar kameez or kurta. Traditional lacha and bangles are also used.

Balochi women wear heavy embroidered shalwar kameez and dupatta according to the weather conditions

Men wear long jama loose shalwar, long scarf,a Pagri of cotton cloth.

The people of sindh have not preserved their traditional clothing the way balochies have but still get to see the traditional "Ajrak" and sindhi "Topi" in rural areas in sindh.

Ajrak is a peace of cloth with a unique print on it with specific colors brown and maroon mainly.

Pathan women wear embroidered kameez with a farak and heavy dupatta and is often made of wool with chappal as footswear. The traditional male pashtun dress includes the "khet partug" peshawari shalwar and the "Perahan" with turban.

Male usually wear "Kufi" peshawari cap turban or pakul as traditional headgear.

Kashmiri people wear perahan shahmina, shahtoosh and janavar when makes them warm in the cold weather

Pakistani culture is very distinct due to the Islamic nature and rich historical background.

Every great nation enjoys its own culture Arabs, Turk, persians every culture is unique and fabulous.

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https://safwa.pk/blogs/news/the-history-of-female-pakistani-clothing

The term Pakistani clothing refers to the ethnic clothing that is typically worn by individuals in the country of Pakistan and by the People of Pakistani descent. Pakistani clothes express the Culture of Pakistan, the Demographics of Pakistan and regional Cultures which include Punjabi culture, Sindhi culture, Balochi culture, Pashtun culture and Kashmiri culture. Dresses in each regional culture reflect weather conditions, the way of living and the distinctive style which gives it a unique identity across all cultures.

Pakistani dressing has similarities with Indian dressing because of pre-partition culture which was shared by these nations for thousands of years. Traditional Pakistani dressing also shares similarities between the ethnic groups of central Asia and ethnicities of the Iranian plateau such as the Turkic ethnic groups (i.e. Kazakhs, Uzbeks, Turkmens) and Iranian ethnic groups (Tajiks, Khorasani Persians and Pashtoons), that have been separate from the cultures of modern day Pakistan during the Durand agreement between Afghanistan and the British raj. With the passage of time Pakistanis are adapting modern dress and cultural clothing, especially in big countries.

The shalwar kameez is the national dress of Pakistan and is worn by men and women in all four provinces Punjab, Sindh, Baluchistan, Khyber Pakhtoonkhwa and FATA in the country and in Azad Kashmir. Each province has its own style of wearing the Shalwar Qameez. Pakistanis wear various clothing depending on the colors and the type of fabric (silk, chiffon, cotton, etc.).

Men across Pakistan prefer shalwar kameez with some additional accessories which include Pakistani Waistcoat, Achkan and Sherwani with the shalwar kameez or with Churidar Pajama. Jinnah Cap also called Karakul, Fez also called Rumi Topi and Taqiyah (cap) is used with Shalwar Kameez. Khussa is a popular foot wear with shalwar kameez. Men like to wear traditional shawls made of Pashmina or other warm materials, especially in Northern part of the country.

With regional clothing, Balochi women wear heavy embroidered Shalwar Kameez and Dupatta depending on the weather conditions. They wear Kameez full of heavy Embroided Shisha work. Sindhi costumes have different styles of embroidery and some women use Ajrak as Dupatta. these women also wear bangles in their traditional way. Punjabi women prefer light embroidery on simple Shalwar Kameez or Kurta. Traditional Lacha and Bangles are also used. Paranda is the traditional, colorful and unique Punjabi item which is used to tie hair. Pathan women wear embroided Kameez with a farak with a heavy Dupatta. Kashmiri phiran style kameez has heavy embroidery on the front neck of the kameez and is often made of wool.

WOMEN DRESSES

With women's religious clothing, it’s aimed to cover all their body parts except face and hands when going outside from their home. Most women will cover their heads with Dupatta or Chadar when outside, but religious women prefer to wear a Scarf, Burqa or Hijab with long full sleeve shirts.

With the passage of time Pakistani women have started to adapt new styles some of which are the combination of Pakistani and Western clothing. Like women wear Embroided Kurta with Jeans and Trousers. Tight half sleeve and sleeveless shirts with Capri Trousers have also been adopted.

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By Hassan Sohail 

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"I founded Netflix. I've built it steadily over 12 years now, first with DVD becoming profitable in 2002, a head-to-head ferocious battle with Blockbuster and evolving the company toward streaming."

In 2011, Netflix's founder-cum-CEO Reed Hastings said above statement in an interview with The Hollywood Reporter, when a price hike misstep by him, prompted lost around 800,000 subscribers, slumped the company's market value to half and almost derailed the future of the company. 

Subsequently, Netflix's finance team sound strategy combined with Reed Hastings rendered "I messed up" apology note to a slew of livid subscribers and skeptical investors turned the tide in Netflix favor. With a year later, the company's streaming subscriber numbers mushroomed. Moreover, Netflix was hailed as the "best-performing stock of the decade".

However, Netflix's peerless position in the streaming space was challenged by the deep-pocketed upstarts. The Hollywood powerhouse Walt Disney Co., to tech giant Apple Inc., all lined to oust the streaming king, subsequently commences the streaming wars.

The streaming wars began two years ago, with the entrance of Disney in the streaming television with the launch of their own streaming service named Disney+. The streaming service racked up 10 million subscribers on its launch day, also predicted to draw in 100 million subscribers by 2025. But that doesn't make Disney+, a big deal in the streaming race. 

What makes Disney a potential rival to Netflix was its vast library of popular shows and movies, ranging from Disney's  enamored animated films to Marvel's top-notch superhero movies, plus pitching the service at a lowball price of $7 dollar per month, compared to Netflix's $13. The smart, pricing move meld with stellar content made the Disney+ formidable in the online subscription market. 

Disney's foray within the streaming TV market in last November, was clashed by Apple's own streaming service. Tech behemoth Apple rolled out its streaming arm called Applet+. Though, Apple TV Plus is a minnow, when compared with Netflix and Disney's massive libraries. However, the streaming services has poached A-list actors and content creators to offer to their subscribed members.

Entering the lucrative South Asian market in the picture. India has already emerged as the latest battleground for media bigwigs. To the extent that, Netflix's CEO Reed Hastings asserted the "next 100 million users of the Netflix will come from India". His rival Amazon Prime Video, snagged the Bollywood's cream to produce local content with the likes of Akshay Kumar and Anushka Sharma. Besides, the streaming service released 10 original Indian shows in 2019 alone. While Disney+ is just too, prepping to make its debut to capture the booming Indian market in May 2020.

Meanwhile, in this streaming race, Pakistan's role compared to its larger neighbor is peripheral. However, streaming juggernauts were captivated by Pakistan's growing market and versatile acting talent. Consequently, Pakistani drama star Zahid Ahmed was roped in for Netflix's first original series from Pakistan. Moreover, another Pakistani web-series titled "Mind Games" is probably going to feature on Netflix, as indicated by the series creators. 

The streaming wars are escalating across the world. According to a report by The Diffusion Group, all major TV media could launch on-demand streaming services by 2022. “Big media companies are reacting more boldly to changes in TV viewing behavior,” Mike Berkley, TDG senior advisor and author of the new report, said. “Consolidating, bulking up on originals and marketing directly to consumers are driving their strategic direction.”

However, on streaming wars, from Disney to Apple executives denied there is one. Netflix's CEO, even called streaming wars "a good thing for business." But, the recent move by Disney to ban Netflix ads on its networks highlighted the extreme competition.  

The on-demand video streaming is approximately $24 billion industry. With the video subscription market is predicted to reach $687.2 billion by 2024. Hence, every major player in the game wants to grab a bigger piece of the pie.

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WAR OF STREAMING SERVICES 

Article - hassan Sohail - BS III- 61 - ENGLISH

"I founded Netflix. I've built it steadily over 12 years now, first with DVD becoming profitable in 2002, a head-to-head ferocious battle with Blockbuster and evolving the company toward streaming."

In 2011, Netflix's founder-cum-CEO Reed Hastings said above statement in an interview with The Hollywood Reporter, when a price hike misstep by him, led to lost about 800,000 subscribers, slumped the company's market value to half and almost derailed the future of the company.


Subsequently, Netflix's finance team sound strategy combined with Reed Hastings rendered "I messed up" apology note to a slew of livid subscribers and skeptical investors turned the tide in Netflix favour. With a year later, the company's streaming subscriber numbers mushroomed. Moreover, Netflix was hailed as the "best-performing stock of the decade".


However, Netflix's peerless position in the streaming space was challenged by the deep-pocketed upstarts. The Hollywood powerhouse Walt Disney Co., to tech giant Apple Inc., all lined to dethrone the streaming king, hence kicks off the streaming wars.


The streaming wars began two years ago, with the entrance of Disney in the streaming television with the launch of their own streaming service named Disney+. The streaming service racked up 10 million subscribers on its launch day, also predicted to attract 100 million subscribers by 2025. But that doesn't make Disney+, a big deal in the streaming race.


What makes Disney a potential rival to Netflix was its vast library of popular shows and movies, ranging from Disney's  enamoured animated films to Marvel's top-notch superhero movies, plus pitching the service at a lowball price of $7 dollar per month, compared to Netflix's $13. The smart, pricing move meld with stellar content made the Disney+ formidable in the online subscription market.


Disney's foray in the streaming TV market in last November, was clashed by Apple's own streaming service. Tech behemoth Apple rolled out its streaming arm called AppleTv+. Though, Apple TV Plus is a minnow, when compared with Netflix and Disney's massive libraries. However, the streaming services has poached A-list actors and content creators to offer to their subscribed members.


Entering the lucrative South Asian market in the picture. India has already emerged as the latest battleground for media bigwigs. To the extent that, Netflix's CEO Reed Hastings asserted the "next 100 million users of the Netflix will come from India". His rival  Amazon Prime Video, snagged the Bollywood's cream to produce local content with the likes of Akshay Kumar and Anushka Sharma. Besides, the streaming service released 10 original Indian shows in 2019 alone. While Disney+ is too, prepping to make its debut to capture the booming Indian market in May 2020.


Meanwhile, in this streaming race, Pakistan's role compared to its larger neighbour is peripheral. However, streaming juggernauts were captivated by Pakistan's growing market and versatile acting talent. Consequently, Pakistani drama star Zahid Ahmed was roped in for Netflix's first original series from Pakistan. Moreover, another Pakistani  web-series titled "Mind Games" is likely to add on Netflix, as indicated by the series creators.


The streaming wars are escalating across the globe. According to a report by The Diffusion Group, all major TV media could launch on-demand streaming services by 2022. “Big media companies are reacting more boldly to changes in TV viewing behavior,” Mike Berkley, TDG senior advisor and author of the new report, said. “Consolidating, bulking up on originals and marketing directly to consumers are driving their strategic direction.”


However, on streaming wars, from Disney to Apple executives denied there is one. Netflix's CEO, even called streaming wars "a good thing for business." But, the recent move by Disney to ban Netflix ads on its networks highlighted the intense competition.


The on-demand video streaming is approximately $24 billion industry. With the video subscription market is expected to reach $687.2 billion by 2024. Hence, every major player in the game wants to grab a bigger piece of the pie.

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                والدین شر و ع ہی سے بچو ں کو سیر و تفر یح کر وا نے کے لیے تفریحی مقا ما ت کا رخ کرتے ہیں۔کیو نکہ تفر یحی مقامات کی سیر کرنے سے بچو ں کو دلی خو شی ملتی ہے،کھیل کو د سے بچو ں میں چستی قا ئم رہتی ہے اور ذہنی اور جسما نی نشو ؤنما بہتر ہو تی ہے۔  تفریحی مقا ما ت میں جا کر بچے اپنے ارد گر د کے ما حو ل کا مشا ہد ہ کر تے ہیں اور جو چیز یں اور سر گر میاں بچے ان تفر یحی مقا ما ت میں جا کر دیکھتے ہیں وہ سب اپنے ذہن میں محفو ظ کر لیتے ہیں۔یعنی وہا ں کی اچھی او ر بری با تو ں کو بھی بچے اپنے ذہن میں قید کر لیتے ہیں۔جس سے ان کی ذہنی نشو ؤنما پر دونو ں قسم کے اثر ا ت مر تب ہو تے ہیں۔تفر یحی مقا ما ت ایسی جگہیں ہو تی ہیں جہا ں پر جا کر ہم اپنی پر یشا نیو ں اور غموں کو کچھ وقت کے لیے بھلا دیتے ہیں اور ذہنی سکو ن اور اطمینا ن محسو س کر تے ہیں۔اگر وا لد ین بھی اپنے بچو ں کے سا تھ تفر یحی مقا ما ت پر جا تے ہیں تو وہ بھی اپنے بچو ں کو خو ش اور ہنستا کھیلتا دیکھ کر خو ش ہو جا تے ہیں۔اس لیے اس با ت سے یہ ثا بت ہو ا کہ تفر یحی مقا ما ت کی ضرو رت نہ صر ف بچو ں کو بلکہ بڑوں کو بھی ہو تی ہے۔اور بعض لو گ ذہنی اور جسما نی تھکا و ٹ دور کر نے کے لیے دما غی سکو ن چا ہتے ہیں تو وہ بھی پا رک میں جا کر بیٹھنا پسند کر تے ہیں اور کچھ لو گ صبح کی سیر کے عا دی ہو تے ہیں اس لیے بھی کسر ت کے لیے پا ر ک میں جا تے ہیں۔با غ کی تا زہ اور ٹھنڈ ی ہوا،پر فضا ما حو ل اور سبزہ انسان کے لیے دل فر یب ہو تا ہے۔

حیدرآباد کاسب سے بڑا اورمشہور پارک رانی باغ ہے۔جسکو دو حصوں میں تقسیم کیا گیا ہے۔ایک حصے میں چڑیا گھر بنایا گیا ہے اور دوسرے حصے میں بچوں کے لیے جھولے اور کھانے پینے کی اشیاء موجود ہیں۔رانی باغ کی حالت صرف عیدین کے تہواروں پر ہی بہتر کی جا تی ہے۔اسکے علا وہ پورے سال کوئی خا ص دیکھ بھال نہیں کی جاتی ہے۔جو جھولے ایک با ر خراب ہو جا ئیں پھر وہ پورا سا ل خراب ہی رہتے ہیں۔بچے رانی باغ میں بہت  پر’جوش ہو کر جا تے ہیں لیکن جب وہاں پر باغ کی اتنی خراب حالت دیکھتے ہیں تو افسردہ ہو کر اپنے گھروں کو وآپس لوٹ جا تے ہیں۔

ْْْ               اسکے علاوہ حیدرآباد میں ایک نرسر ی پارک ہے جسمیں صرف بچوں کے لیے پھسرنی ہی درست حا لت میں ہے باقی کوئی جھولا جھولنے کے قابل نہیں ہے۔سارے جھولے خراب  اور ٹوٹے ہوئے ہیں،گھاس بلکل نہ ہو نے کے برابر ہے، پارک کے چا روں طرف چہل قدمی کے لیے ایک راستہ (ٹریک) ہے  جسکی حالت کچھ بہتر ہے۔بینچزصرف چار سے پانچ ہی درست حالت میں ہیں با قی  سا ری ٹوٹئی ہو ئی ہیں۔

ا یک بے بی افضاء پا ر ک  با نی ایم کیو ایم کے نا م پر ہے۔اس پا رک کی حا لت دو سر ے پا ر کو ں کی نسبت قد ر بہتر ہے۔ تما م جھو لے صحیح حا لت میں مو جو د ہیں اور گھا س بھی ہر ی بھر ی ہے۔یہ ایک وا حد پا رک ہے جہا ں عوا م کا کافی رش ہوتا ہے۔کیو نکہ اس پا رک میں بچو ں کے کا فی من پسند جھو لے ہیں۔اور بچوں کے لیے کھا نے پینے کی اشیاء بھی پارک کے باہر دستیاب ہوتی ہیں۔ اس پارک  کے صاف ستھرے ما حول اور ہریا لی کی وجہ سے لوگ ورزش کرنے آتے ہیں۔

اسکے علاوہ ایک باغِ مصطفی گراونڈ ہے۔ جسکی حالت کچھ سالوں پہلے بہت  بہتر ہوا کرتی تھی۔لیکن اب صرف میدان ہو گیا ہے۔جسمیں لڑکے فوٹ بال اور کرکٹ کھیلتے ہیں۔اس گراونڈ میں عیدین کی نمازیں بھی ادا کی جاتی ہیں اور مختلف پارٹیوں کے جلسے بھی ہوتے ہیں۔ تفریحی مقا مات کی کمی کی ایک وجہ یہ ہے کہ جو غیر آباد  علاقے تھے وہاں عمارتیں بنا دی گئی ہیں اور جہاں تفریح گاہ تعمیر کیے جا تے وہاں بڑے بڑے شاپنگ مالز بنادیئے گئے ہیں۔ 

حید ر آ با دمیں تفر یحی مقا ما ت کی کمی کی اصل وجہ ایم۔این۔اے اور ایم۔پی۔اے کی نظر اندا زی اور کر پشن ہے۔کیو نکہ ان کو جو فنڈزدئیے جا تے ہیں وہ ان کا صحیح استعما ل نہیں کر تے اور تفر یحی مقا ما ت پر لگا نے کے بجا ئے انھیں دوسری جگہو ں پر  استعما ل کر لیتے ہیں اور تفر یحی مقا ما ت  اجڑ ے پڑ ے رہتے ہیں۔اگر یہ لو گ اپنا کام پو ری ایما ند اری سے کر یں تو ان مقا ما ت کی حا لت قدر ِبہتر ہو جا ئے۔کیو نکہ تفر یحی انسا نی صحت کے لیے بہت ضر وری ہے۔یہ انسا ن کو فر حت و مسرّت فر ا ہم کر تی ہے۔

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                 والدین شر و ع ہی سے بچو ں کو سیر و تفر یح کر وا نے کے لیے تفریحی مقا ما ت کا رخ کرتے ہیں۔کیو نکہ تفر یحی    مقا ما ت کی سیر کرنے سے بچو ں کو دلی خو شی ملتی ہے،کھیل کو د سے بچو ں میں چستی قا ئم رہتی ہے اور ذہنی اور جسما نی نشو ؤنما بہتر ہو تی ہے۔  تفریحی مقا ما ت کا ایک فا ئد ہ یہ بھی ہے کہ بچو ں کے دو سر ے بچو ں کے سا تھ دو ستا نہ تعلقا ت قا ئم ہو تے ہیں۔جس سے ان کے نئے دوست بنتے ہیں اور ان کو ان بچو ں سے کچھ نیا سیکھنے کو ملتا ہے۔تفر یحی مقا ما ت میں جا کر بچے اپنے ارد گر د کے ما حو ل کا مشا ہد ہ کر تے ہیں اور جو چیز یں اور سر گر میاں بچے ان تفر یحی مقا ما ت میں جا کر دیکھتے ہیں وہ سب اپنے ذہن میں محفو ظ کر لیتے ہیں۔یعنی وہا ں کی اچھی او ر بری با تو ں کو بھی بچے اپنے ذہن میں قید کر لیتے ہیں۔جس سے ان کی ذہنی نشو ؤنما پر دونو ں قسم کے اثر ا ت مر تب ہو تے ہیں۔کیو نکہ یہ بچو ں کی سیکھنے کی عمر ہوتی ہے اس لیے بچے جیسا ماحو ل دیکھتے ہیں خو د کو اسی ما حو ل میں ڈھا لنے کی کو شش کر تے ہیں۔اس لیے ہمیں چا ہیے کہ   بچو ں کو اسی ما حو ل میں لے کر جا ئیں جہا ں کا ما حو ل اچھا اور فا ئد ہ مند ہو۔

تفر یحی مقا ما ت ایسی جگہیں ہو تی ہیں جہا ں پر جا کر ہم اپنی پر یشا نیو ں اور غموں کو کچھ وقت کے لیے بھلا دیتے ہیں اور ذہنی سکو ن اور اطمینا ن محسو س کر تے ہیں۔اگر وا لد ین بھی اپنے بچو ں کے سا تھ تفر یحی مقا ما ت پر جا تے ہیں تو وہ بھی اپنے بچو ں کو خو ش اور ہنستا کھیلتا دیکھ کر خو ش ہو جا تے ہیں۔اس لیے اس با ت سے یہ ثا بت ہو ا کہ تفر یحی مقا ما ت کی ضرو رت نہ صر ف بچو ں کو بلکہ بڑوں کو بھی ہو تی ہے۔کیو نکہ بعض دفعہ بڑ ے بھی اپنے مسا ئل اور پریشا نیا ں وقتی طور پر بھلا نے کے لیے تفر یحی مقا ما ت کا رخ کر تے ہیں اور بعض لو گ ذہنی اور جسما نی تھکا و ٹ دور کر نے کے لیے دما غی سکو ن چا ہتے ہیں تو وہ بھی پا رک میں جا کر بیٹھنا پسند کر تے ہیں اور کچھ لو گ صبح کی سیر کے   عا دی ہو تے ہیں اس لیے بھی کسر ت کے لیے پا ر ک میں جا تے ہیں۔با غ کی تا زہ اور ٹھنڈ ی ہوا،پر فضا ما حو ل اور سبزہ انسان کے لیے دل فر یب ہو تا ہے۔[[  

ان دو پیراگراف کو مختصر کر کے صرف ایک پیرا کے برابر کرو،  ہمیں حیدرآباد پر مواد چاہئے۔  اس پر زیادہ فوکس کرو۔

لیکن قا بل  اعتر ا ض با ت یہ ہے کہ حید رآبا د میں تفر یحی مقا ما ت کی شد ید کمی ہے ِ۔اور جو تھو ڑے بہت تفر یحی مقا ما ت قا ئم ہیں ان کی حا لت زار لو گو ں کے سا منے ہے۔جھو لے ٹو ٹے ہو ئے تفر یحی مقا ما ت پر بکھر ے پڑ ے ہیں،ز مین پر گھا س کا نا م و نشا ں تک نہیں ہے اورصفا ئی کی نا قص صو ر تحا ل یہ بتا رہی ہے کہ کو ئی ان کو دیکھنے وا لا نہیں ہے۔

کیسے کمی ہے؟ اس کو ثابت کرنا پڑے گا۔ اس وقت موجود پارک ہیں ان کا احوال اور حالت لکھو۔ شہر کی آبادی تکنی ہےِ وہاں کتنے بچے ہیں، اس سے ثابت کرو کہ خود پارکس کی تعداد کم ہے۔ اور پھر لکھو کہ جو ہیں ان کی حالت کیا ہے۔ یہ اس طرح لکھا ہوا ہے کہ حیدرآباد کا نام  کاٹ دیں تو کسی بھی شہر پر فٹ ہوسکتا ہے۔  یہ حالت کیوں ہے؟ اس کے لئے ذمہ دار ادارے کون ہیں؟ 

ما ضی میں جو پا رک صا ف ستھر ے اور ہر ے بھر ے  ہو ا کر تے تھے اب صر ف خا لی مید ا ن بن کر رہ گئے ہیں۔جس کی بنیا دی وجہ یہ ہے کہ لوگوں کے لیے تفریحی مقامات میں رہنے کے کوئی خاص اصول نہیں بنائے گئے اور جو اصول بنائے گئے ہیں انکی لوگ پابندی نہیں کرتے یہی وجہ ہے کے تفریحی مقامات کی حالت بد سے بدترہوتی جارہی ہے۔تفر یحی مقا ما ت کی خر ا ب حا لت کی وجہ سے وا لد ین اپنے بچو ں کواب وہا ں بھیجنے سے گر یز کر تے ہیں کیو نکہ اب ان   ویر ا ن مید ا نو ں میں بچو ں سے زیا دہ نشہ آور لو گو ں کی بیٹھک ہو تی ہے۔ایسے میں وا لدین اپنے بچو ں کو خر ا ب ما حو ل سے محفوظ رکھنے کے لیے مختلف ٹیکنا لو جیز فر ا ہم کر رہے ہیں جس سے بچے گھر بیٹھے لطف اند وز ہو رہے ہیں لیکن اس سے بچو ں کی آنکھیں اثر انداز ہو رہی ہیں۔

حید ر آ با دمیں تفر یحی مقا ما ت کی کمی کی اصل وجہ ایم۔این۔اے اور ایم۔پی۔اے کی نظر اندا زی اور کر پشن ہے۔کیو نکہ ان کو جو فنڈزدئیے جا تے ہیں وہ ان کا صحیح استعما ل نہیں کر تے اور تفر یحی مقا ما ت پر لگا نے کے بجا ئے انھیں دوسر ی جگہو ں پر  استعما ل کر لیتے ہیں اور تفر یحی مقا ما ت اجڑ ے پڑ ے رہتے ہیں۔اگر یہ لو گ اپنا کام پو ری ایما ند اری سے کر یں تو ان مقا ما ت کی حا لت قدر ِبہتر ہو جا ئے۔کیو نکہ تفر یحی انسا نی صحت کے لیے بہت ضر وری ہے۔یہ انسا ن کو فر حت و مسرّت فر ا ہم کر تی ہے۔

  

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Article Waseem Akram BS 65 English

Revised

Language As A Barrier in Learning

Waseem Akram

 2k18/MC/165



  Whenever it comes to learn something, language is considered as the essential limb. Whether it is concerned with education, literature, culture, art or skill. If one has not command over the language one could not express and learn appropriately.

  Learning more languages is helpful to learn more things but it becomes a curse and barrier in the learning process, when it is not appropriately learned. In simple terms, if a student does not understand the language spoken by the teacher in class-room then ideas and information can’t be passed long. Pakistan is one of 44 countries with large number of population, without access to education in mother tongue.

  Language remains along with humans from cradle to death.  A child has to learn language, so that he could learn survival manners and societal culture. Moreover a child grows with innovative ideas and his native language becomes a mean for demonstration. If children are not allowed to speak in their native language a bulk of ideas can be killed. Language barriers also impact negatively learners, as they can cause frustration. Learner may feel inadequate, shameful and sad for not being able to understand. Second language learners feel a fear to express themselves and concern that they will be mocked if they will  try to speak in a new language, that's all can cause emotional stress and may interfere with learning.

 Education is an essential source of learning which is also can be used for progress of human being in terms of emotions, intellectual  physical and spiritual. Education allows one to spend a peaceful and happy life. But it could be possible if there is a language barriers in education system. These barriers arise when different languages are spoken. Everyone has its own language belongs to different regions, and ethnicity.  For instance: Siraeki, Dhatki, Balochi etc. .These all languages are spoken together, there will be must a confliction  over misunderstanding of concept or   certain meaning of the word.

During colonial era of Britain in subcontinent language policy in education was that Urdu was the educational medium of general masses while English for elite .This colonial era policy was crucial and criticize earlier in 1880 for severely divorcing the people of Punjab from their sociolinguistic roots. Punjabi speakers were not educated in Punjabi and their lost approach from their folk knowledge. Meanwhile Hindu Punjab were not educated and conscious  in Sanskrit and Punjabi Muslims were not educated in Persian, so that both groups lost contact with literary sources of their cultures.

Language is also deeply concerned with education. Generally,  in school college and universities course schemes are organized in that language which are not native. If students have no grip over language in which students are learning, it will be not only stressful to learn but also refrain to generate creative ideas. The Global Monitoring Report On Education For All In 2015, reveals that worldwide the choice of language instructions and language policy in schools is critical for effective learning.

 A conclusive point of a  research under British council namely “ Teaching and Learning in Pakistan: Role of language in Education” enumerates that  if children become literate in their home language first than later learning of foreign language or second language ( e.g. English, Chinese) is likely to be more successful than if the foreign language than or second  language is used as the medium of instruction.

  Although arts or skill is not directly concerned with language, but it can be demonstrated through the language, inform of instructions, techniques, tips and tricks. If one loss the focus from all these elements whether expressed or written in during learning, owing to poor linguistic skills. Obviously, it will resist the learner.

Language is an important part of culture and nation. It connects people together and helps to learn and understand their culture, history, and literature. Likewise, Sindh has broad culture, literature, and history. There is number of people who do not understand the Sindhi language, so they remain deprived and unconscious about such elements.

  These barriers can be replaced by technology. Translation is an activity of communication between languages through which one can learn anything concerned with education, literature, history, art and other things. Individually it can be done through online translators. This way, mighty ideas could be prevented from devastation and defend from imposing of foreign language.

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More evidences in shape of examples, facts figures and reports are needed. U did not made the point

 Language As A Barrier in Learning

Waseem Akram 2k18/MC/165

  Whenever it comes to learn something, language is considered as the essential limb. Whether it is concerned with education, literature, culture, art or skill. If one has not command over the language one could not express and learn appropriately.

  Learning more languages is helpful to learn more things but it becomes a curse and barrier in the learning process, when it is not appropriately learned. In simple terms, if a student does not understand the language spoken by the teacher in class-room then ideas and information can’t be passed long.

  Language remains along with humans from cradle to death.  A child has to learn language, so that he could learn survival manners and societal culture. Moreover a child grows with innovative ideas and his native language becomes a mean for demonstration. If children are not allowed to speak in their native language a bulk of ideas can be killed. Language barriers also impact negatively learners, as they can cause frustration. Learner may feel inadequate, shameful and sad for not being able to understand. Second language learners feel a fear to express themselves and concern that they will be mocked if they will  try to speak in a new language, that's all can cause emotional stress and may interfere with learning.

 Education is an essential source of learning which is also can be used for progress of human being in terms of emotions, intellectual  physical and spiritual. Education allows one to spend a peaceful and happy life. But it could be possible if there is a language barriers in education system. These barriers arise when different languages are spoken. Everyone has its own language belongs to different regions, and ethnicity.  For instance: Siraeki, Dhatki, Balochi etc. .These all languages are spoken together, there will be must a confliction  over misunderstanding of concept or   certain meaning of the word.

Language is also deeply concerned with education. Generally,  in school college and universities course schemes are organized in that language which are not native. If students have no grip over language in which students are learning, it will be not only stressful to learn but also refrain to generate creative ideas. The Global Monitoring Report On Education For All In 2015, reveals that worldwide the choice of language instructions and language policy in schools is critical for effective learning.

  Although arts or skill is not directly concerned with language, but it can be demonstrated through the language, inform of instructions, techniques, tips and tricks. If one loss the focus from all these elements whether expressed or written in during learning, owing to poor linguistic skills. Obviously, it will resist the learner.

Language is an important part of culture and nation. It connects people together and helps to learn and understand their culture, history, and literature. Likewise, Sindh has broad culture, literature, and history. There is number of people who do not understand the Sindhi language, so they remain deprived and unconscious about such elements.

  These barriers can be replaced by technology. Translation is an activity of communication between languages through which one can learn anything concerned with education, literature, history, art and other things. Individually it can be done through online translators. This way, mighty ideas could be prevented from devastation and defend from imposing of foreign language.

Article shahroz aqeeque Enlsih

It this approved topic? 
I think no.
Most of part is lifted form 2-3 published articles. This is unfair

Empowered Thari Women & Their Talent (Ralli) 
Roll No not mentioned.??????
At least u should write ur name with capital, its proper noun
2k18lMCl shahroz aqeeque kunbhar  

 https://www.ralliquilt.com/ralli-quilt-history/

Thar is a unique and vibrant part of Sindh. Some define it as the land of peace and peacocks. And some define it as traditional colors of peace in the form of cultural handmade stuff. all in their place but Hardships and harmony of Thar is difficult to understand unless people pay their visit to Thar, sitting in luxury life could not help to figure out the lifestyle of people of Thar. and how they manage travel of miles and kilometers to get water from well, depth of 150-250 feet pulling the rope with the help of Camels.
 
Thar is a remote area of Sindh, when it rains people make most from their lands and their cattle's, but not every time. they do suffer rest of the year even they suffer a lot when there is famine. however, their working women help them out through their creative work of traditional stuff like rallies, Gaaj (traditional bridal dress) 

Every morning women from Thar travels about kilometers and collect water for daily household  use,  they have difficult day around looking after house business taking care of Childrens  despite the hard life they manage to take time, sit together under the shadow of large tree and start their talent of sewing, colorful art in form of "Rallies"  number of women sits together they chat with each other sometimes they sung together sometimes  they do teach their sisters and daughters.

Small pieces of colorful clothes are joined together and form Ralli, it is all covered with a Niddle and thread hand stitched materials. Thari women make beautiful Designs of Ralli which has its own value in Sindh and all over in the country.

Rallis are commonly used as a covering for wooden sleeping cots, as a floor covering, storage bag,   Ralli quilts are an important part of a girl's dowry. Owning many Ralli quilts is a measure of wealth.

Design and patterns of Ralli varies with the change in area like Tharparkar is famous in Joggian ji Ralli, and Meghwaran Ji Ralli have exclusive patterns, In central Sindh Khairpur Sakhar Mehran ji ralli have prime importance, around Manchar lack Kaache ji Ralli, specially of Thari Ralli have designs of peacocks moon elephant and parrot.

Working women sell Rallis in the moment of crisis when they are only source to help her husband out from the famine and misery, they better become the supportive hand for their men they do sell their creative work. 


They work hard for months or even years to make a single quilt ( Ralli ) but they hardly paid of their work  the more expensive they could sell about thirty to forty thousand per product Ralli.  when it reaches in the market, they take about 2 lacs sometimes even more.

In contempt of these issues women from Thar are happy to get enough to survive beyond this their men's support make them confident to work for it. Even poets have sung them many times in regard this perspective of making rallies. Subedar Muhnji Ralli , Jamadar Muhnji Ralli. many poets have sung the efforts of working women of Thar specially shaikh Ayaz have shown effective love towards Thar he said;

  Tati Main Gharo Ka Bhare Thi Pei,

  Thari Soonh Chamka Kare Thi Pei 

 ‘in hot deserted area someone is collecting water oh you shining beauty of Thar’

Article M Ahmed Naghman Roll 83 Eng - Referred back

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Film Industry In Pakistan

Muhammad Ahmed Naghman

Roll: 2K18/MC/83

Film industry in Pakistan better known as Lollywood. Pakistan film Industry use to be one of the best film Industry around the world in 1960s. The downfall of the Pakistan film Industry started in 1970s after the bad policies which were made by the government that resulted in film producers stop investing in Pakistan film industry however after 30 to 40 years the revival of Pakistan film industry started in 2000 when the youth stepped in the industry the youth came up with new ideas of making new film in a different way which make producers to invest in the Pakistan film Industry and it also gained the public interest since then Pakistan have made really successful films such as Bol, Khuda Kay Liye, Jawani Phir Nahi Aani which were very successful and gained the public interest since then Pakistan film industry is doing pretty well but still there is a lot of work to be done for the betterment of the Pakistan film Industry.

Areeba Haroon Article Bs 30 English

Revised

Suicide- An Attempt to End Miseries

Areeba Haroon

2k18/MC/30`

Nowadays suicide is like an option to every human problem. One thinks that committing suicide will end his miseries and will bring peace to everyone around him. Feeling suicidal mostly happens when one doesn’t see any solution to the on-going problems in life.

According to the report of WHO (World Health Organization) in every 40 seconds, an individual ends his life which makes the total of 800,000 or close per year around the world. There can be slight possibility of more than 20 or so trying to attempt suicides. In the report of organization (WHO) suicide rate has increased 60% in last 45 years.

Going further, if we narrow it down to our country Pakistan, a recent report by Human Rights Commission, 1338 people committed suicide in 2018, the majority of were men (786), while women were 553 in number. It was the latest research; the ratio of last year is still not confirmed.

With all these happenings in the world, only one question remains intact that why would someone do this? What makes them do this horrible act to leave everything behind them, their work, relations and most of all a chance to make life better than before? What can be so horrifying that one chooses to die rather than solves it?

There can be many reasons to do this act and justify it, but mentioned in many different sites, article, surveys and reports; some people dealing with issues like depression, anxiety, loneliness and mainly feeling helpless commit suicide.

Mostly, depression happens if someone faces death of a close person or an end of any relationship, this is a stage, where one doesn’t know what to do or cope up with the situations. They get loaded up with the feelings of sadness and hurt, and these feelings hover over the senses to think with a proper mind-set.

Second, is anxiety, it is more likely to happen when one is suffering from stress or fear, which is likely to happen, when someone is facing financial problems and don’t know how to look after his family financially, job loss and unemployment.

Loneliness is the third reason, one often feels alone and isolated, when he is bullied in public or in academic  institutes, body shamed or humiliated about every little thing and in getting rid of all this, does commit suicide which is just an impulsive act to end all of this.

Forth is helplessness, which is very common in our society, one has this feelings that nothing can be done to solve any problem. These feelings usually come when one is arrested on false accusation or have an academic pressure.

But not all of them want to die; some of them want to live and see a new sunrise with a new start but just don’t know who to reach out for help or comfort, some of them just think themselves nothing more than a burden to their family and friends, and they find death an ultimate solution for everything.

Like a recent case of suicide in Qasimabad Hyderabad, a 22 year old boy named Hamza hung himself and died because of domestic issue, and a well known face, designer Anam Tanoli, aged 26 killed her by hanging from the ceiling in October, 2018.

Almost every reason to commit suicide is mentioned above but, the non-obvious reason which we all fail to notice, is that these people try to find support in every possible thing around them but don’t get any. And we as an audience don’t know how to handle and behave in front of these people, thus they don’t get any type of support. This eventually hurt them to this extent that they try to commit suicide.

There are many other cases, but the question is until when? It is on the government to make institutes, introduce suicide prevention ways and give class to both depressed person for stress-relieve and people around them that how should they handle things with these people. It is our responsibility as human beings to care about people around us. See if they need any help, do they need a shoulder to rely on? There should be support groups for these people to discuss their problems and activities to release their stress and see a world with positive mind-set.

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Suicide- An Attempt to End Miseries

Areeba Haroon

2k18/MC/30`

Nowadays suicide is like an option to every human problem. One thinks that committing suicide will end his miseries and will bring peace to everyone around him. Feeling suicidal mostly happens when one doesn’t see any solution to the on-going problems in life.

In every 40 seconds, an individual ends his life which makes the total of 800,000 or close per year around the world. There can be slight possibility of more than 20 or so trying to attempt suicides. ( who says? quotes authentic source and report)

Suicide comes on 10^th as a death cause worldwide. (source)

Going further, if we narrow it down to our country Pakistan, 1338 people committed suicide in 2018, the majority of were men (786), while women were 553 in number. It was the latest research (?); the ratio of last year is still not confirmed.

With all these happenings in the world, only one question remains intact that why would someone do this? What makes them do this horrible act to leave everything behind them, their work, relations and most of all a chance to make life better than before? What can be so horrifying that one chooses to die rather than solves it?

There can be many reasons to do this act and justify it, but some people dealing with issues like depression, anxiety, loneliness and mainly feeling helpless commit suicide, but some of them do this because either it is their impulsive act or they made a huge mistake, and other people don’t know how to get help, or think themselves as a burden. (Experts reports research etc attribution bcz this is not otherwise ur subject)

Mostly, depression happens if someone faces death of a close person or an end of any relationship, this is a stage, where one doesn’t know what to do or cope up with the situations. They get loaded up with the feelings of sadness and hurt, and these feelings hover over the senses to think with a proper mind-set.

Second, is anxiety, it is more likely to happen when one is suffering from stress or fear, which is likely to happen, when someone is facing financial problems and don’t know how to look after his family financially, job loss and unemployment.

Loneliness is the third reason, one often feels alone and isolated, when he is bullied in public or in academic  institutes, body shamed or humiliated about every little thing and in getting rid of all this, does commit suicide which is just an impulsive act to end all of this.

Forth is helplessness, which is very common in our society, one has this feelings that nothing can be done to solve any problem. These feelings usually come when one is arrested on false accusation or have an academic pressure.

But not all of them want to die; some of them want to live and see a new sunrise with a new start but just don’t know who to reach out for help or comfort, some of them just think themselves nothing more than a burden to their family and friends, and they find death an ultimate solution for everything.

Like a recent case of suicide in Qasimabad Hyderabad, a 22 year old boy named Hamza hung himself and died because of domestic issue, and a well known face, designer Anam Tanoli, aged 26 killed her by hanging from the ceiling in October, 2018. 

Lack of support system is main cuase

There are many other cases, but the question is until when? It is on the government to make institutes, introduce suicide prevention ways and it is our responsibility as human beings to care about people around us. See if they need any help, do they need a shoulder to rely on? There should be support groups for these people to discuss their problems and activities to release their stress and see a world with positive mind-set.