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business
techniques are changing in Pakistan
syed fahad-bs roll 145-English
In past people Are
selling there products on carts and in shops.
Businesses spread across the world after 19th century. Business took
its modern look from ancient Greece. Entrepreneurial businesses come together
in early 6th century. Business is the activity making products for
selling by doing businesses you can be independent or make a better lifestyle
as compare to others full time jobs.
People are
selling different daily usage products on shops and carts
but now people are going for new innovation for better financial gains in business. IN carts and shops they are only able to reach
limited buyers and customers . They are able to put limited product on it.If you want
to make bigger financial gains or profits you must need to upgrade your self.
New
innovation are also coming towards Pakistan. Now Pakistani people are doing there (their) business in real
market as well as in online markets after stepping into online business markets Pakistani are able
to make bigger profits and able to sell there product
across the country through online shopping sites. Online shopping site pull Pakistani business man from poverty. They are now able to achieve
desirable targets and life long goals.
When we talk
about business there are millions possibility out there .People are using different techniques to sell the products. Younger generation
also using Creative problem solving cps is a new technique for new business ideas.
Creative problem solving was developed by Alex Osborn and Sid Parnes .Creative problem
solving helping people to make new innovation and new starts up are on its way.
Never ending business 1 you can
open a hospital because millions of people visits doctor daily 2 clothes daily
millions buy cloths 3 construction business 4 freelancing websites. If you want
to make your business successful you must have conformance quality,durability,repair ability. If you have these three things you are able
to run a better businesses. Most profitable businesses in Pakistan Industiral manufacturing,
Trading(import and export)Retail industry and Agriculture. Everyone can
easily able to start a successful business all you needed is a step forward.
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business techniques are changing in Pakistan
syed fahad-bs roll 145-English
In past people are selling there products on carts and in
shop .
people are selling different daily usage products on it but
now people are going for new innovation for better financial gains in business.In carts and shop they are
only able to reach limited buyers and customers in carts and shop they are able
to put limited product in it.if you want to make bigger financial gains or
profits you must need to upgrade your self.
new innovation are also coming towards Pakistani. now
Pakistani people are doing there business in real market as well as in online
markets after stepping into online business markets Pakistani are able to make
bigger profits and able to sell there product across the country online
shopping site.online shopping site pull Pakistani business man from poverty
they are now able to achieve desirable targets
when we talk about business there are millions possibility
out there . never ending business 1 you can open a hospital because millions of
people visits doctor daily 2 clothes daily millions buy cloths 3 construction
business 4 freelancing websites.If you want to make your business successful
you must have conformance quality,durability,repair ability.
everyone can easily able to start a successful business all
you needed is a step forward.
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