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Joint Family System: heaven or hell?

Taqwa Ahmed

2k18/MC/155

Asian countries like Pakistan still has the culture of Joint Family System where more than one generation live under a single roof hold same property in common and live with love and care. People prefer to live combine in a family because it helps them to maintain their relationships with their families, want their children to have the love of their grandparents.

Living and eating together reduce the load of the work and responsibilities of ones life. It’s interesting to hear it but not easy to live in becacuse nowadays privacy has been priority to us. As the world is changing, our perspective of living has been changed. You don’t want to spend your whole life following instructions and footsteps of your family members, while you know that they will never be satisfied with your efforts.

One of my friend shared her experience of joint family and she told me that she has enjoyed her life fully with her family (a family full of peoples).she explained me both the negative and positive sides of the joint family system. She has grown up in a joint family where she lives along with her uncles who are government employees and her father is a teacher and her mother and the other ladies of the home are just housewives. The area was not likeable for a child to grow up so her parents didn’t let her to play outside of the house. They kept her inside the home and was urged to play with her cousins. She enjoyed her childhood with her cousin’s gang and experienced the environment of the home. Then she got admission in school. As she was growing up her parents compared her abilities and skills with her elder cousins that ‘if they can do better in studies then you can do it too’. By living in a joint family Sila has to sacrifice her privacy, her uncle and Aunt  always interfere in her matter which was very annoying most of the time. This was the moment from where every kitty fight turned into a huge conflict.

One day Sila’s elder brother and her cousin got into a fight and her aunt get involved in it and this little argument turned into a quarrel. Her aunt always compare her family with Sila’s family and argue with her husband that her father has good income you have to give me the comfort which your brother is providing to his family, why can’t we live a life like them?  It created jealousy and problems between the families and disputes and quarrels made them upset. That was not only one thing happening in their family but many more like comparison between the two cousins. One has become the eye-candy of the house and the other one has to follow him/her. Sila’s parents want her to be like that one cousin who is successful in his career. They want her to follow his footsteps and she began to forget her own abilities and tried to adopt the qualities of his elder cousin. Her personality her interest vanished from time to time and her aim was to fulfill the demands of the family and to be the one who they want her to be.

Sila has always listened to the taunts sometimes on her dressing, sometimes on the way she speaks, sometime for the friends she have and sometimes for the meal she eats. In joint families there’s a member who is ready to taunt you everytime. Her Grandparents have set the elder and successful youngsters of the family as a role model to follow for the upcoming ones.

Her parents shifted to Hyderabad for her studies. Now she’s living in a nuclear family. And she narrates that:Inspite of all the problems she love her whole family. They have fun together. In evening the whole family sit in the TV launch for tea and her mother bring snacks for the kids and they  talk on different topics. Everyone take participate in the never tiring conversation. One of them share their ups and downs and the whole family give varieties of suggestions for their problems. And after that the cousins of her age  get together and play different games like Ludo, Carrom, Dump charades, hide and seek etc. Evening is never boring for a joint family. Everyday you have different things to do.

The Benefits of having a joint family is everyone share their ideas with each other. Whenever there’s some event or wedding at home everyone put their efforts to make it perfect. They help each other in their good and bad. The most interesting thing in joint family is you can taste same dish of different flavor. Every joint family has a aunt whose handmade briyani is loved by whole family. Shopping with cousins is different kind of fun you get better suggestions from them because you know each other very well. You can borrow clothes from your cousins for parties. You get help in studies. They help you in hard times.

If there’s no spice in life then how will you come to know that what sweetness is? In the same way every family has some problems but you get even more closer to your family after solving them together. It’s only depend on you that how you handle it.

“The Family is one of the nature’s masterpiece”  George Santanyana

Take care of your family, if you have them.

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Joint Family System: Heaven or Hell?

Taqwa Ahmed

2k18/MC/155

Years back, a family full of peoples welcome their upcoming generation, a babygirl named Sila. She was growing up in a joint family where she live along with her uncles who were government employees and her father is a teacher and her mother and the other ladies of the home are just housewives. The area was not likeable for a child to grow up so her parents don’t let her to play outside of the house. They keep her inside the home and was urged to play with her cousins. She enjoyed her childhood with her cousin’s gang and experienced the environment of the home. Then she got admission in school. As she was growing up her parents compared her abilities and skills with her elder cousins that 'if they can do better in studies then you can do it too'. By living in a joint family Sila has to sacrifice her privacy, her uncle and Aunt  always interfere in her matter which was very annoying most of the time. And her relatives take more interest in her family matters and her decisions this is the point from where little argument or a kitty fight changed into a huge fight.

One day Sila's elder brother and her cousin got into a fight and her aunt get involved in it and this little fight turned into a huge conflict. Her aunt always compare her family with Sila’s family and argue with her husband that they are living a good life and her father has good income you have to give me the comfort which your brother is providing to his family. It creates jealousy and problems between the families. These disputes and quarrels make oneself more depressed. This is not only one thing which happens in joint families. Sila’s parents want her to be like that one cousin who is successful in his career. They want her to follow her steps and she began to forget her own abilities and tried to adopt the qualities of her elder cousin. Her personality her interest vanished from time to time and her aim was to fulfill the demands of the family and to be the one who they want her to be.

Asian countries like Pakistan still has Joint Family System where more than one generation live under a single roof hold same property in common and live with love and care. It’s interesting to hear it but difficult to live in becacuse you spend you whole life in following instructions not only of parents but the whole family and pleasing them while you know that they can’t be satisfied with your efforts because they already have one cousin as eye-candy.

Sila has always listened to the taunts sometimes on her dressing, sometimes on the way she speaks, sometime for the friends she have and sometimes for the meal she eats. In joint families there’s a member who is ready to taunt you Everytime. Her Grandparents have set the elder and successful youngsters of the family as a role model to follow for the upcoming ones.

Inspite of all the problems she love her whole family. They have fun together. In evening the whole family sit in the TV launch for tea and her mother bring snacks for the kids and they  talk on different topics. Everyone take participate in the never tiring conversation. One of them share their ups and downs and the whole family give varieties of suggestions for their problems. And after that the cousins of her age  get together and play different games like Ludo, Carrom, Dump charades, hide and seek etc. Evening is never boring for a joint family. Everyday you have different things to do.

The Benefits of having a joint family is everyone share their ideas with each other. Whenever there’s some event or wedding at home everyone put their efforts to make it perfect. They help each other in their good and bad. The most interesting thing in joint family is you can taste same dish of different flavor. Every joint family has a aunt whose handmade briyani is loved by whole family. Shopping with cousins is different kind of fun you get better suggestions from them because you know each other very well. You can borrow clothes from your cousins for parties. You get help in studies. They help you in hard times. So we can’t title a family as heaven or hell, it’s only us who make a family heaven or hell.

If there’s no spice in life then how will you come to know that what sweetness is? In the same way every family has some problems but you get even more closer to your family after solving them together. It’s only depend on you that how you handle it.

“The Family is one of the nature’s masterpiece”  George Santanyana

Take care of you and your family.

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Introverts in the world of extroverts

Taqwa Ahmed

2k18/MC/155

The world is full of different kinds of people with different nature, attitudes and personalities. Similarly “Introversion is a trait or tendency to avoid social interaction”. People who are introverts in their nature feel shy to confess their feelings and emotions with others. They preoccupied in their own thoughts and enjoy to spend their time alone.

Have you ever wondered why a person becomes introvert? The water will take the shape of the mold in which it is placed in, similarly, when the children is brought up in a society where talking in a high pitch or asking questions from elders is considered as insult then how can you expect that he or she will try to learn expressing his or her emotions in front of others?

Introverts suffer with invisibility. If we take an example of any school, the school Teacher pay attention to those students who are more active and have loud voice. So the shy one get unnoticed and tends to not to give answers in the next class. The extroverts take away all the limelight while the introverts stay in the shadow.

The society value a person who is outgoing, frank, bold and confident. Inshort everyone prefer to be an extrovert. The upbringing of the child, the role of the environment plays a major part in the development of human behavior. Sometimes the incidents and the situations make a change in your personality. You are not borned as an introvert, but the Society Made you! We must pay attention to those who are shy to come forward and encourage them to talk.

We live in a society where talking less is considered as rude. I have always heard that you must be talkative and confident to face the world and to become everyone’s favorite. But what if you don’t like to mingle with people? I like to give time to myself to enjoy my own company. But unfortunately, this society prefer social butterflies and introverts often face tough time to maintain their relationships with extrovert friends and later they got dumped by their buddies because they don’t want to go parties and public places. Their isolation leads to depression and anxiety.

Being an introvert I feel anxious sometimes when things get awkward in parties or when I’m with my relatives. Pakistan is a country where family relations and friends are valued. So your presence is mandatory in functions and events specially family weddings, you can’t skip them. Imagine what the wedding is like for an introvert person! Everybody drag you on stage and insist you to dance and click pictures. And your parents play crucial role to keep you in limelight so you can get better proposals. Parents are always anxious for their introvert child. They face many challenges and are concerned about why their children is being so shy? Why doesn’t he/she participate? Why doesn’t he/she enjoys social gathering? Parents must try to understand the psyche of their each children. If your children is not dominating the conversation as your other children that doesn’t mean that he’s not dump. “There’s zero correlation between the best talker and having the best ideas”. Said Susan Caine.

There are many living examples in our society who are introverts and they are successful in their respective fields. They don’t consider their trait of Introversion as their weakness.

The co-founder of Microsoft, and the world’s richest man Bil Gates is an example. He says: “ I think introverts can do quite well”, “If you’re clever you can learn to get the benefits of being an introvert”.

Susan Caine in her book “Quiet; the power of introverts” Wrtites: “You don’t need to be loud to have great ideas”.

Mark Zuckerberg, the founder of Facebook who has connected the world through his social app is an introvert himself.

You’ll be astonished to know that many celebrities who have fan following in millions are actually introverts.

The childhood crush of every children Emma Watson, Harry Potter’s star admitted that she’s an introvert and she feels nervous at the parties.  Reported by: Daily Mirror.

It’s a positive thing to be an introvert, you can be a creative thinker, good listener, and a brilliant observant.

Smile, breathe, remember you are safe and loved even out of your comfort zone.

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Introversion

Taqwa Ahmed

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The world is full of different kinds of people with different nature, attitudes and personalities. Similarly “Introversion is a trait or tendency to avoid social interaction”. People who are introverts in their nature feel shy to confess their feelings and emotions with others. They preoccupied in their own thoughts and enjoy to spend their time alone.

Have you ever wondered why a person becomes introvert? The water will take the shape of the mold in which it is placed in, similarly, when the children is brought up in a society where talking in a high pitch or asking questions from elders is considered as insult then how can you expect that he or she will try to learn expressing his or her emotions in front of others?

Introverts suffer with invisibility. If we take an example of any school, the school Teacher pay attention to those students who are more active and have loud voice. So the shy one get unnoticed and tends to not to give answers in the next class. The extroverts take away all the limelight while the introverts stay in the shadow.

The society value a person who is outgoing, frank, bold and confident. Inshort everyone prefer to be an extrovert. The upbringing of the child, the role of the environment plays a major part in the development of human behavior. Sometimes the incidents and the situations make a change in your personality. You are not borned as an introvert, but the Society Made you! We must pay attention to those who are shy to come forward and encourage them to talk.

We live in a society where talking less is considered as rude. I have always heard that you must be talkative and confident to face the world and to become everyone’s favorite. But what if you don’t like to mingle with people? I like to give time to myself to enjoy my own company.

There are many living examples in our society who are introverts and they are successful in their respective fields. They don’t consider their trait of Introversion as their weakness.

The co-founder of Microsoft, and the world’s richest man Bil Gates is an example. He says: “ I think introverts can do quite well”, “If you’re clever you can learn to get the benefits of being an introvert”.

Susan Caine in her book “Quiet; the power of introverts” Wrtites: “You don’t need to be loud to have great ideas”.

Mark Zuckerberg, the founder of Facebook who has connected the world through his social app is an introvert himself.

You’ll be astonished to know that many celebrities who have fan following in millions are actually introverts.

The childhood crush of every children Emma Watson, Harry Potter's star admitted that she’s an introvert and she feels nervous at the parties.  Reported by: Daily Mirror.

It’s a positive thing to be an introvert, you can be a creative thinker, good listener, and a brilliant observant.

Smile, breathe, remember you are safe and loved even out of your comfort zone.