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                                                      Mohatta Palace

Najaf Rajper

Roll no: 2k18/MC/113

The province of Sindh is home to many palaces, forts, castles, folklores and different cultural buildings, which proves that the people living in Sindh have always had diversity in culture, tradition and religion. The proof of our diverse culture can also be seen in almost all the cities and villages of Sindh, perhaps, Mohatta Palace is in Karachi which is also a pretty good sign of having a diverse culture.

This famous cultural heritage is known with the name of Mohatta Palace which is present in the posh area, Clifton of Karachi. Inside every beautiful building there is a hidden story and in this building the story of true love can be seen in art, art that takes you deep in the chapters of history.

“Everybody cannot see the love in art” Caretaker of Mohatta Palace

The story behind the construction of the Mohatta Palace is an appealing story of love. It reminds us of the story of Taj Mahal, which is counted as one of the seven wonders of the world, it was built on the orders of the Emperor Shah Jehan in the memory of his wife’. The distinction between these two stories is that Shah Jehan built Taj Mahal after his wife passed away, whereas Mohatta palace was built in order to save his wife from dying.

Usman Damohi, a well-known Karachi historian, writes in his book Karachi Taareekh Kay Aaeenay Main

“In 1927, Shivratan Mohatta, a successful Marwari businessman, decided to build a luxurious house in the prosperous seaside neighbourhood of Clifton. The architect chosen for the assignment was Ahmed Hussein Agha, one of the first Muslim architects of India. He came from Jaipur to take up the assignment, taken from the biography of Shivratan Mohatta.”

The reason behind its building this luxurious monument was a serious illness that Mohatta’s wife suffered from. Doctors told Mohatta that the fresh winds of the sea would make his wife healthy again. Therefore, Shivratan had this enormous bungalow built in the previous century in Clifton, covering a very large area facing the sea.

This double-story heritage covers an area of 18,000 square feet, there hasn't been a single structure that could match the area that Mohatta Palace covers, neither before nor after Partition. Upon entering the palace, you first notice the mesmerising coloured windows on the exterior, a wall of stone, an arch and minarets; a stunning view of architectural splendour.

The rooms on the first floor are comforting also royal in their setting, an absolute comfortable place to visit. The second floor is a vast splendid room covering very large area, it's hard to look at a room and imagine it being used by a singular person.

Even today, if you go all the way up to the rooftop of the building, it might be possible to catch a view of the sea, though dull residential high-rises have surrounded the Mohatta Palace so completely that even the winds from the sea cannot reach their once favourite destination. Back when it was constructed, the occupants of the Mohatta Palace could enjoy not only the sea breeze, but a view of the clean and unpaved seashore, too.

On the rooftop is a magnificent structure with a central dome surrounded by smaller ones. This was meant to protect inhabitants from the severe heat of direct sunlight. In addition to the central structure, the building has four other minaret-domes on its corners.

While visiting Delhi in 2004 on an official visit, I met a gentleman. He was a businessman in Karachi who moved to Delhi after Partition. He told a story of Mohatta, who had been a good friend of the Quaid-e-Azam since long.

Mr Mohatta decided to live in Karachi, even after the Great Divide. But one day he was contacted by a powerful political officer of the country, who asked him to leavethe Mohatta Palace for some government office. According to the old gentleman, Mr Mohatta was stunned.

Then overnight, he decided to leave. The next day, he packed his and his family's belongings, migrating to Bombay. He handed over the keys of Mohatta Palace to its manager, instructing him to hand over a note to the politician concerned, saying that he could have simply gifted the palace on being requested rather than being ordered to do so.

Mr Mohatta and his family members never visited Karachi or for that matter any other city of Pakistan again."

Pakistan has a lot of  beautiful cultural heritages to see and to look after. There are many cultural heritages which need to secured, persevered for our generations to see and observe their cultural Identity. ????

                                                      Mohatta Palace

Najaf Rajper

Roll no: 2k18/MC/113

The province of Sindh is home to many palaces, forts, castles, folklores and different cultural buildings, which proves that the people living in Sindh have always had diversity in culture, tradition and religion. The proof of our diverse culture can also be seen in almost all the cities and villages of Sindh, perhaps, Mohatta Palace is in Karachi which is also a pretty good sign of having a diverse culture.

This famous cultural heritage is known with the name of Mohatta Palace which is present in the posh area, Clifton of Karachi. Inside every beautiful building there is a hidden story and in this building the story of true love can be seen in art, art that takes you deep in the chapters of history.

“Everybody cannot see the love in art” Caretaker of Mohatta Palace

The story behind the construction of the Mohatta Palace is an appealing story of love. It reminds us of the story of Taj Mahal, which is counted as one of the seven wonders of the world, it was built on the orders of the Emperor Shah Jehan in the memory of his wife’. The distinction between these two stories is that Shah Jehan built Taj Mahal after his wife passed away, whereas Mohatta palace was built in order to save his wife from dying.

Usman Damohi, a well-known Karachi historian, writes in his book Karachi Taareekh Kay Aaeenay Main

“In 1927, Shivratan Mohatta, a successful Marwari businessman, decided to build a luxurious house in the prosperous seaside neighbourhood of Clifton. The architect chosen for the assignment was Ahmed Hussein Agha, one of the first Muslim architects of India. He came from Jaipur to take up the assignment, taken from the biography of Shivratan Mohatta.”

The reason behind its building this luxurious monument was a serious illness that Mohatta’s wife suffered from. Doctors told Mohatta that the fresh winds of the sea would make his wife healthy again. Therefore, Shivratan had this enormous bungalow built in the previous century in Clifton, covering a very large area facing the sea.

This double-story heritage covers an area of 18,000 square feet, there hasn't been a single structure that could match the area that Mohatta Palace covers, neither before nor after Partition. Upon entering the palace, you first notice the mesmerising coloured windows on the exterior, a wall of stone, an arch and minarets; a stunning view of architectural splendour.

The rooms on the first floor are comforting also royal in their setting, an absolute comfortable place to visit. The second floor is a vast splendid room covering very large area, it's hard to look at a room and imagine it being used by a singular person.

Even today, if you go all the way up to the rooftop of the building, it might be possible to catch a view of the sea, though dull residential high-rises have surrounded the Mohatta Palace so completely that even the winds from the sea cannot reach their once favourite destination. Back when it was constructed, the occupants of the Mohatta Palace could enjoy not only the sea breeze, but a view of the clean and unpaved seashore, too.

On the rooftop is a magnificent structure with a central dome surrounded by smaller ones. This was meant to protect inhabitants from the severe heat of direct sunlight. In addition to the central structure, the building has four other minaret-domes on its corners.

 Following para is from Hashim Raza article published in Dawn, quote properly with attribution

[[[While visiting Delhi in 2004 on an official visit, I met a gentleman. He was a businessman in Karachi who moved to Delhi after Partition. He told a story of Mohatta, who had been a good friend of the Quaid-e-Azam since long.

Mr Mohatta decided to live in Karachi, even after the Great Divide. But one day he was contacted by a powerful political officer of the country, who asked him to leave the Mohatta Palace for some government office. According to the old gentleman, Mr Mohatta was stunned.

Then overnight, he decided to leave. The next day, he packed his and his family's belongings, migrating to Bombay. He handed over the keys of Mohatta Palace to its manager, instructing him to hand over a note to the politician concerned, saying that he could have simply gifted the palace on being requested rather than being ordered to do so.

Mr Mohatta and his family members never visited Karachi or for that matter any other city of Pakistan again."

Pakistan has a lot of  beautiful cultural heritages to see and to look after. There are many cultural heritages which need to secured, persevered for our generations to see and observe their cultural Identity. ????]]

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                                                      Mohatta Palace

Najaf Rajper

Roll no: 2k18/MC/113

The province of Sindh is home to many palaces, forts, castles, folklores and different cultural buildings, which is the proof that people living in this province have always had distinct cultures, traditions and religions. The proof of our diverse culture can also be seen in the city of lights, Karachi to be exact.

This famous cultural heritage is known with the name of Mohatta Palace which is present in the posh area of Karachi, known as Clifton. Inside every beautiful building there is a story hidden and in this building the story of true love is hidden deep in the chapters of history, which a few people know.

The caretaker of the Mohatta Palace showed me every single room of the palace  and told us me about the hidden story which the world doesn’t know.

 The story behind the construction of the Mohatta Palace is a appealing story of love. It reminds us of the tale of the Taj Mahal, which is counted as one of the seven wonders of the world, it was built on the orders of the Emperor Shah Jehan in the memory of his wife’. The distinction between these two stories is that Shah Jehan built Taj Mahal after his wife passed away, while Mohatta had the palace built in order to save his wife from dying. Usman Damohi, a well-known Karachi historian, writes in his book Karachi Taareekh Kay Aaeenay Main:

In 1927, Shivratan Mohatta, a successful Marwari businessman, decided to built a luxurious house in the prosperous seaside neighbourhood of Clifton. The architect chosen for the assignment was Ahmed Hussein Agha, one of the first Muslim architects of India. He came from Jaipur to take up the assignment, taken from the biography of Shivratan Mohatta.

It is said that the reason behind its building this luxurious monument was a serious illness that Mohatta’s wife suffered from. Doctors had told Mohatta that the fresh winds of the sea would make his wife healthy. Thus, Shivratan had this enormous bungalow built in the previous century in Clifton, covering a very large area.

As per the officers of culture department, This double-story heritage covers an area of 18,000 square feet. There hasn't been a single structure that could match the area that Mohatta Palace covers, neither before nor after Partition. Upon entering the palace, you first notice the mesmerising coloured windows on the exterior, a wall of stone, an arch and minarets; a stunning view of architectural splendour.

The rooms on the first floor are comforting also royal in their setting, an absolute comfortable place to be in. The second floor is a beauty not to forget. It's hard to look at a room and imagine it being used by a singular person.

Even today, if you go all the way up to the rooftop of the building, it might be possible to catch a view of the sea, though dull residential high-rises have surrounded the Mohatta Palace so completely that even the winds from the sea cannot reach their once favourite destination. Back when it was constructed, the occupants of the Mohatta Palace could enjoy not only the sea breeze, but a view of the then clean and unpaved seashore, too.

On the rooftop is a magnificent structure with a central dome surrounded by smaller ones. This was meant to protect inhabitants from the severe heat of direct sunlight. In addition to the central structure, the building has four other minaret-domes on its corners.

While visiting Delhi in 2004 on an official visit, I met a gentleman. He was a businessman in Karachi who moved to Delhi after Partition. He told a story of Mohatta, who had been a good friend of the Quaid-e-Azam since long.

Mr Mohatta decided to live in Karachi, even after the Great Divide. But one day he was contacted by a powerful political officer of the country, who asked him to leavethe Mohatta Palace for some government office. According to the old gentleman, Mr Mohatta was stunned.

Then overnight, he decided to leave. The next day, he packed his and his family's belongings, migrating to Bombay. He handed over the keys of Mohatta Palace to its manager, instructing him to hand over a note to the politician concerned, saying that he could have simply gifted the palace on being requested rather than being ordered to do so.

Mr Mohatta and his family members never visited Karachi or for that matter any other city of Pakistan again."

Pakistan has a lot of  beautiful cultural heritages to see and to look after. There are many cultural heritages which need to secured, persevered for our generations to see and observe their cultural Identity.

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Online Business in Pakistan

Najaf Rajper

Article English- Revised

Roll no: 2k18/MC/113

E-commerce or Online Business has revolutionised the modern business throughout the world giving new business opportunities.

 The convenience gained from Online Business had influenced both the businessman and consumers to switch from old retailer towards online shopping. As the internet population continues to grow, new sales businesses have evolved and we are seeing firms investing in online business as online stores are now becoming an essential part of their sales and marketing strategies.

The rise of online business has inspired many Retailers to setup online distribution networks as the system is more cheap, consumer-friendly and manageable in comparison with a traditional way, which requires an entirely different distribution model. A traditional distribution channel of customer goods in Pakistan normally entails a Manufacturer/Service Provider, Distributor/ Retailer/Branch, and Consumer. With the influx of online business new distribution business has evolved by which Manufacturers are enjoying the freedom to sell products to a large number of  buyers directly whereas customer could enjoy the independency to choose different alternates in small time on low cost.

Recently in these years when technology have increased and transformed the globe into global village, different businessman have left the old ways of businesses behind by investing in online businesses.

The majority of ideas no matter how good they might sound end up being a complete money-sucking nightmare due to expensive costs, slow scalability and low margins. Online businesses however, can be very appealing as they don’t have the traditional hurdles that most new enthusiasts face. 

The e-commerce started 40 years ago and it continues to grow with new technologies, innovations, and thousands of traditional businesses entering the online market each year. Electronic Data Interchanges and teleshopping in the 1970s built the way for the modern day e-commerce store. The history of e-commerce is closely entangled with the history of the internet. Online shopping only became possible when the internet was opened to the public in 1983.

This new opportunity attracted many business enthusiasts, from all over the globe.

Therefore E-commerce market in Pakistan has now been around for nearly 18 years. The first online store named Beliscity started in 2001 and even though it no longer exists today, other early stores such as Shophive (2005), Symbios (2006) and HomeShopping (2008), while each of these websites continues to serve its customers even today, none of them has blossomed into homegrown successes stories as the likes of Flipkart or Coupang.

In 2012 Rocket Internet decided to enter the Pakistani market. Within the first 6 months, they had already launched three start-ups namely Azmalo, Daraz and FoodPanda. Azmalo shut down within its first 2 months but  later came with a new vision as a drop-shipping that too eventually changed its name to Kaymu.

 Kaymu then went on to be acquired by Daraz in 2016. Daraz started as a fashion-focused portal and in early 2015 transitioned to a managed marketplace focused on all categories and was subsequently acquired by Alibaba in the summer of 2018. They also subsequently launched 5 other ventures which were eventually shut down.

The oldest foreign entrant is OLX, which started its operations in 2010 and continues to operate today. Other large global start-ups included Careem and Uber in 2015 and 2016 respectively. In the ride-hailing category, the largest local player is Bykea, and we have regional players such as Cheetay in Lahore.

Pakistani start-ups of note include, Rozee.pk which started as side project of Naseeb Networks in 2006, and Zameen.com, Pakistan’s largest property classified player, which also started up at around the same time in 2007. The oldest however is PakWheels which started in 2003, initially, as community forum for automobile enthusiasts in the country.

According to The World Bank, the number of people using internet in Pakistan has increased from 6.8% to 18% during 2007 to 2015. The number of people using internet in India increased from 3.95 % to 26% during the same period. 

Pakistan is ranked 19th out of 210 nations in terms of internet users with 30 million surfers. Being a under developed country, Pakistan still lacks infrastructure required for a well-established  business environment such as availability of internet, public awareness and lack of acceptance. But despite the fact, an increased acceptance for online shopping in Pakistan. In past few years, many online business offering food, electronics, clothing and even rides. Older Industries that once heavily relied on a traditional brick-and-mortar system are now setting up direct links with customers by changing the demand of any intermediary support.

As the market is changing and modernizing we should follow modern ways of doing businesses and different laws should be made and implemented to protect the privacy of customers and should limit the frauds too.

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Online Business in Pakistan

Najaf Rajper

Article English- Revised

Roll no: 2k18/MC/113

Online business in Pakistan is growing day by day and more sites are coming on the surface with new and different ideas of entrepreneurship. Pakistani internet user base is growing day by day and creating many opportunities for the customers and the businessman.

Pakistan have been home to different online business websites like,

·         500mein.pk.

·         Daraz.pk.

·         Kaymu.pk.

·         OLX.com.pk.

·         Buyon.pk.

·         Getnow.pk.

·         Bazarpk.com.

·         Homeshopping.pk.

Recently in these years when technology have increased and transformed the globe into global village, different entrepreneurs have left the traditional ways of businesses behind by investing in online businesses.

The majority of ideas no matter how good they might sound end up being a complete money-sucking nightmare due to expensive costs, slow scalability and low margins. Online businesses however, can be very appealing as they don’t have the traditional hurdles that most new enthusiasts face. 

The e-commerce started 40 years ago and it continues to grow with new technologies, innovations, and thousands of traditional businesses entering the online market each year. Electronic Data Interchanges and teleshopping in the 1970s built the way for the modern day e-commerce store. The history of e-commerce is closely entangled with the history of the internet. Online shopping only became possible when the internet was opened to the public in 1983.

This new opportunity attracted many business enthusiasts, from all over the globe.

One of the most successful online business of this era is Alibaba, it was founded in 1999 by a English teacher, Jack Ma, who scraped together $80,000 from 80 investors to start an online marketplace for Chinese companies. He became the richest man in China and his estimated net worth has topped 

Another successful online business emerged in USA, in 1995, Amazon officially opens for business as an online bookseller. Within a month, the fledgling retailer had shipped books to all 50 U.S. states and to 45 countries. Founder Jeff Bezos’s motto was “get big fast,” and Seattle-based Amazon eventually morphed into an e-commerce colossus, selling everything from groceries to furniture to live ladybugs, and helping to revolutionize the way people shop.

Therefore E-commerce market in Pakistan has now been around for nearly 18 years. The first online store named Beliscity started in 2001 and even though it no longer exists today, other early stores such as Shophive (2005), Symbios (2006) and HomeShopping (2008), while each of these websites continues to serve its customers even today, none of them has blossomed into homegrown successes stories as the likes of Flipkart or Coupang.

In 2012 Rocket Internet decided to enter the Pakistani market. Within the first 6 months, they had already launched three start-ups namely Azmalo, Daraz and FoodPanda. Azmalo shut down within its first 2 months but  later came with a new vision as a drop-shipping that too eventually changed its name to Kaymu.

 Kaymu then went on to be acquired by Daraz in 2016. Daraz started as a fashion-focused portal and in early 2015 transitioned to a managed marketplace focused on all categories and was subsequently acquired by Alibaba in the summer of 2018. They also subsequently launched 5 other ventures which were eventually shut down.

The oldest foreign entrant is OLX, which started its operations in 2010 and continues to operate today. Other large global start-ups included Careem and Uber in 2015 and 2016 respectively. In the ride-hailing category, the largest local player is Bykea, and we have regional players such as Cheetay in Lahore.

Other large Pakistani start-ups of note include, Rozee.pk which started as side project of Naseeb Networks in 2006, and Zameen.com, Pakistan’s largest property classified player, which also started up at around the same time in 2007. The oldest however is PakWheels which started in 2003, initially, as a community forum for automobile enthusiasts in the country.

As there is ease and comfort, there are different frauds too like, Most online shopping scams are essentially ordering a product and never receiving the product, so you paid the money and you received nothing in return. Some of the most common items involved in scams are pets and pet supplies, cosmetics, clothing and health care. But Broker went beyond just selling knockoff glasses. Some customers never received their orders though their credit cards had been charged. Those who dared to complain or ask for a refund found themselves on the receiving end of exorbitant “restocking” or “cancellation” fees. And if they objected, things got even worse. That percentage has nearly doubled in just the last five years. But even as we become more and more comfortable with the process, experts warn the internet is still fraught with risks. 

Over the past year, e-commerce websites have started working and are keeping a good standard. Pakistan’s e-commerce industry is becoming more stable. keeping this progress in mind government should deal with online fraudulent with iron hands. 

According to me government should make laws regarding the frauds of online business as it is growing on a massive scale and a quality business should prevail.

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Online Business

Name: Najaf Rajper

Roll no: 2k18/MC/113

Business have been in demand and individuals have found unique business ideas, but recently in these years when technology have increased and transformed the globe into global village, different entrepreneurs have left the traditional ways of businesses behind by investing in online businesses.

The majority of ideas, it doesn’t matter how good they might sound, it ends up being a complete money-sucking nightmare due to expensive costs, slow scalability and low margins. Online businesses however, can be very appealing as they don’t have the traditional hurdles that most new enthusiasts face.

E-commerce have started 40 years ago and it continues to grow with new technologies, innovations, and thousands of traditional businesses entering the online market each year. Electronic Data Interchanges and teleshopping in the 1970s paved the way for the modern day e-commerce store. The history of e-commerce is closely entangled with the history of the internet. Online shopping only became possible when the internet was opened to the public in 1983.

This new opportunity attracted many business enthusiasts, from all over the globe.

One of the most successful online business of this century is Alibaba, it was founded in 1999 by a English teacher, Jack Ma, who scraped together $80,000 from 80 investors to start an online marketplace for Chinese companies. He became the richest man in China and his estimated net worth has topped

Another successful online business emerged in USA, in 1995, Amazon officially opens for business as an online bookseller. Within a month, the fledgling retailer had shipped books to all 50 U.S. states and to 45 countries. Founder Jeff Bezos’s motto was “get big fast,” and Seattle-based Amazon eventually morphed into an e-commerce colossus, selling everything from groceries to furniture to live ladybugs, and helping to revolutionise the way people shop.

History of E-commerce in Pakistan

E-commerce market in Pakistan has now been around for nearly 18 years. The first online store named Beliscity started in 2001 and even though it no longer exists today, other early stores such as Shophive (2005), Symbios (2006) and HomeShopping (2008), while each of these websites continues to serve its customers even today, none of them has blossomed into homegrown successes stories as the likes of Flipkart or Coupang.

In 2012 Rocket Internet decided to enter the Pakistani market. Within the first 6 months, they had already launched three ventures namely Azmalo, Daraz and FoodPanda. Azmalo shut down within its first 2 months but was later re-envisioned as a drop-shipping that too eventually changed its name to Kaymu. Kaymu then went on to be acquired by Daraz in 2016. Daraz started as a fashion-focused portal and in early 2015 transitioned to a managed marketplace focused on all categories and was subsequently acquired by Alibaba in the summer of 2018. They also subsequently launched 5 other ventures which were eventually shut down.

The oldest foreign entrant is OLX, which started its operations in 2010 and continues to operate today. Other large global start-ups included Carem and Uber in 2015 and 2016 respectively. In the ride-hailing category, the largest local player is Bykea, and we have regional players such as Cheetay in Lahore.

Other large Pakistani startups of note include, Rozee.pk which started as side project of Naseeb Networks in 2006, and Zameen.com, Pakistan’s largest property classified player, which also started up at around the same time in 2007. The oldest however is PakWheels which started in 2003, initially, as a community forum for automobile enthusiasts in the country.

As there is ease and comfort, there are different frauds too like, Most online shopping scams are essentially ordering a product and never receiving the product, so you paid the money and you received nothing in return. Some of the most common items involved in scams are pets and pet supplies, cosmetics, clothing and health care. But Broker went beyond just selling knock-off glasses. Some customers never got their orders even though their credit cards had been charged. Those who dared to complain or ask for a refund had themselves on the receiving end of unreasonable “restocking” or “cancellation” fees. And if they objected, things got even worse. That percentage has nearly doubled in just the last five years. But even as we become more and more comfortable with the process, experts warn the internet is still fraught with risks.

Over the past year, many e-commerce websites have started working and are keeping a good standard. Pakistan’s e-commerce industry is becoming more stable. keeping this progress in mind government should deal with online fraudulent with iron hands.

According to me government should make laws regarding the frauds of online business as it is growing on a massive scale and a quality business should prevail.